Tomorrow
Even when facing death, hope can be found.16 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The soldier was hoping for one more day. When we have faith, God does give us hope, faith, trust, and love so we can remember how blessed we are, and we can hope for a brighter day. Like your story's thought.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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The soldier was hoping for one more day. When we have faith, God does give us hope, faith, trust, and love so we can remember how blessed we are, and we can hope for a brighter day. Like your story's thought.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from jmdg1954
"I would want you to give me tomorrow."
Absolutely, Marine! Absolutely!
Great story and a solid entry for this 100 word flash contest.
Best of luck going forward
John
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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"I would want you to give me tomorrow."
Absolutely, Marine! Absolutely!
Great story and a solid entry for this 100 word flash contest.
Best of luck going forward
John
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you, John, for your review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a profound little story of sadness blended with hope. Sometimes the most simple thoughts capture everything we want to say. And this does it for me in spades! Well done and good luck! A strong contender for the winner! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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This is such a profound little story of sadness blended with hope. Sometimes the most simple thoughts capture everything we want to say. And this does it for me in spades! Well done and good luck! A strong contender for the winner! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, for your review and encouragement,
Comment from royowen
What a wonderfully honest and humble request, when it comes to a case of life and death, anybody in a state of that pretty bleak place in that twilight zone between heaven and hell, and wanting just to come out of it. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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What a wonderfully honest and humble request, when it comes to a case of life and death, anybody in a state of that pretty bleak place in that twilight zone between heaven and hell, and wanting just to come out of it. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Roy, for your review.
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Most welcome
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I wasn't able to identify myself earlier.
Thanks again, Roy.
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are such touching words, in a war situation all we want to do is to survive it to experience another day. These soldiers going into battle think that these could be their final hours, it is very sad indeed, a poignant post, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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These are such touching words, in a war situation all we want to do is to survive it to experience another day. These soldiers going into battle think that these could be their final hours, it is very sad indeed, a poignant post, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Dollie, for your review and insight.
Comment from Navada
The simplicity and yet profundity of this reply is powerful. Sometimes, words contain worlds. I like the straightforward narration and you leave room for the reader to respond in their own fashion. Lovely writing.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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The simplicity and yet profundity of this reply is powerful. Sometimes, words contain worlds. I like the straightforward narration and you leave room for the reader to respond in their own fashion. Lovely writing.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your review.