2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Navada
"Leg deep in stardust". What a beautiful phrase and image! I like the contrast between moon and stars in this celestial piece and the sense of wonder it inspires.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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"Leg deep in stardust". What a beautiful phrase and image! I like the contrast between moon and stars in this celestial piece and the sense of wonder it inspires.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
lol - cute! i could totally see a moth sitting on a moonflower watching the stars... very nice imagery! smooth flow and cool pics.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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lol - cute! i could totally see a moth sitting on a moonflower watching the stars... very nice imagery! smooth flow and cool pics.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I've always loved seeing the lun moth. Their shape is so nouveau. They just remind me of something that would be on a Tiffany lamp. The sleek lines and curves. Beautiful imagery. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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I've always loved seeing the lun moth. Their shape is so nouveau. They just remind me of something that would be on a Tiffany lamp. The sleek lines and curves. Beautiful imagery. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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I love art nouveau. Almost as much as Frida Khalo's paintings.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is great! Your haiku reminded me that moths have legs. A moth flew up from nowhere and brushed on my cheek as my two sisters called to tell me my mom had just died. So I collect moths and butterfly things. This is an excellent imagefor your perfect words.
Best wishes,
Alexan
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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This is great! Your haiku reminded me that moths have legs. A moth flew up from nowhere and brushed on my cheek as my two sisters called to tell me my mom had just died. So I collect moths and butterfly things. This is an excellent imagefor your perfect words.
Best wishes,
Alexan
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
So beautiful and velvety inside and above, it just reminded me of the blue monarch that I saw in Costa Rica. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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So beautiful and velvety inside and above, it just reminded me of the blue monarch that I saw in Costa Rica. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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