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22 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Lovely!!!
Lovely pictures.
Perfect syllable count and rhyme and internal rhyme for this delightful two line poem.
Creative on so many levels.
Beautiful!!!!
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Lovely!!!
Lovely pictures.
Perfect syllable count and rhyme and internal rhyme for this delightful two line poem.
Creative on so many levels.
Beautiful!!!!
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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thank you janet! 🤗😁👍💙🖊️🦄
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A cleverly composed 2 line poem with that rather restrictive brief. Your words skilfully reflect the eye-catching image, including the internal and ending rhyme. I'm still trying to get my head round the word 'beset' but I can appreciate the context for it. Thanks for sharing and good luck, Shelley! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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A cleverly composed 2 line poem with that rather restrictive brief. Your words skilfully reflect the eye-catching image, including the internal and ending rhyme. I'm still trying to get my head round the word 'beset' but I can appreciate the context for it. Thanks for sharing and good luck, Shelley! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
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lol thank you debbie 😁😊💙🖋️🦄
Comment from jim vecchio
I don't know which is more beautiful, the images or your words. You painted quite a picture for us in two small lines. Once again, you've proved to be the tops in any poetic form!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I don't know which is more beautiful, the images or your words. You painted quite a picture for us in two small lines. Once again, you've proved to be the tops in any poetic form!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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lol!! thank you jim! 😅😁💙🖋️🦄
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Love your writing and also teaching skills!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice images and presentation, shelley.
-You have written a good essence poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job describing the nature
of a day from sunrise to sunset.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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-Very nice images and presentation, shelley.
-You have written a good essence poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job describing the nature
of a day from sunrise to sunset.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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thank you pam! 😁💙🖋️🦄
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You're welcome, shelley.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, first of all, I must compliment you on a stunning presentation of this wee gem, and that's what your poem is, my friend -- a flawless jewel. Your rhyme is uncommon and lovely.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Wow, first of all, I must compliment you on a stunning presentation of this wee gem, and that's what your poem is, my friend -- a flawless jewel. Your rhyme is uncommon and lovely.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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cool!! thank you dawn 😁😊👍💙🖊️🦄
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My pleasure!
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nice. This is most clever as you have added an additional element of this being not only a two-line poem with internal and external rhymes, but it is also an antonym poem.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Very nice. This is most clever as you have added an additional element of this being not only a two-line poem with internal and external rhymes, but it is also an antonym poem.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
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hehe thank you gloria 🤗😁👍💙🖋️🦄
Comment from Navada
I like the visual imagery here and the the sense of expansiveness and the all-encompassing atmosphere of this piece. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest. :)
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I like the visual imagery here and the the sense of expansiveness and the all-encompassing atmosphere of this piece. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest. :)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
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thank you navada 🤗💙🖋️🦄
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked looking at your presentation here. Two lines isn't much to create an impression, but it definitely points something important out here in 12 syllables, that life is studded or adorned with beauty if we will only look. Good luck in that contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I liked looking at your presentation here. Two lines isn't much to create an impression, but it definitely points something important out here in 12 syllables, that life is studded or adorned with beauty if we will only look. Good luck in that contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you crystie 😁😊👍💙🖊️🦄
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What beautiful pictures. Amazing sunrise and sunset. They are both beautiful when you are at the beach. Poem and picture match. I enjoyed this well.done
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What beautiful pictures. Amazing sunrise and sunset. They are both beautiful when you are at the beach. Poem and picture match. I enjoyed this well.done
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
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thank you brenda 😊👍💙🖋️🦄
Comment from Douglas Goff
What a clever rhyme. This is very enjoyable and the picture you chose is absolutely brilliant.
A most enjoyable entry for the Two Ladies me Poetry competition from my favorite magical unicorn.
Good luck!
D
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What a clever rhyme. This is very enjoyable and the picture you chose is absolutely brilliant.
A most enjoyable entry for the Two Ladies me Poetry competition from my favorite magical unicorn.
Good luck!
D
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
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thank you douglas 😁👍💙🖊️🦄