Prayers for Fanstory Family
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Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for adding to the book with your signature mermaid style. I especially liked:
"world of the pen
poems, essays, stories
scripts, novels
souls who write
these, need her
positive thoughts"
That describes us here!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you for adding to the book with your signature mermaid style. I especially liked:
"world of the pen
poems, essays, stories
scripts, novels
souls who write
these, need her
positive thoughts"
That describes us here!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I appreciate your thoughtful words. Thank you for taking time to read my poem. Elaine
Comment from Dawn Munro
Geez Louise, mermaids, you have me tearing up! As an Aquarian, this strikes a chord for more than the obvious reason -- about whom are you writing?
WONDERFUL! If I had any sixes left, I would adorn this with one so fast you would think you swam into an undertow!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Geez Louise, mermaids, you have me tearing up! As an Aquarian, this strikes a chord for more than the obvious reason -- about whom are you writing?
WONDERFUL! If I had any sixes left, I would adorn this with one so fast you would think you swam into an undertow!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I am missing Judiverse and others who are currently unable to be here with us on Fanstory. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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Aww!
Comment from Aaron Milavec
Your narrative has a certain charm; yet, it lacks a soul-griping delivery. Just why and how she will return to the "world of the pen" is not clear.
Peace and joy in writing,
Aaron
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Your narrative has a certain charm; yet, it lacks a soul-griping delivery. Just why and how she will return to the "world of the pen" is not clear.
Peace and joy in writing,
Aaron
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from T.A. Walk
Very cool piece!!
The image and color choices are beautiful!!
I have no SPAG critique to offer at this time.
Thank you for sharing your work!!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Very cool piece!!
The image and color choices are beautiful!!
I have no SPAG critique to offer at this time.
Thank you for sharing your work!!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Elaine.
-This is a lovely poem and tribute to those
who can't be with us on FanStory right now.
-Very nice imagery that is comforting and peaceful.
-My favorite part is
"waiting, for those
who create
to return to the
world of the pen."
A very calm, peaceful, and hopeful concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Elaine.
-This is a lovely poem and tribute to those
who can't be with us on FanStory right now.
-Very nice imagery that is comforting and peaceful.
-My favorite part is
"waiting, for those
who create
to return to the
world of the pen."
A very calm, peaceful, and hopeful concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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Thank you. I hope everyone is alright and returns to us. Elaine
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You are welcome, Elaine, and I hope so, too.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is all very imaginative and creative, inspired from the image. It seems you really invested yourself into that mermaid (which, from your profile name, is obviously a very appropriate choice of subject) and introduced your FS family into the ocean scene.Very nicely done! Best wishes Debbie
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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This is all very imaginative and creative, inspired from the image. It seems you really invested yourself into that mermaid (which, from your profile name, is obviously a very appropriate choice of subject) and introduced your FS family into the ocean scene.Very nicely done! Best wishes Debbie
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. Elaine