Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I enjoyed this haiku that you've written about a ladybug. One of the reasons I enjoy it is that I have a friend who has nickname me ladybug, and I'd rather like the nickname. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Patricia. I hope you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Have you ever played the video machine at the casino, where there are ladybugs as the winner? It can pay big bucks sometimes if you get a full screen of these ladybugs.

We have several of these ladybugs from the spring until the fall. They become pests as they come in numbers.

Do you have these where you live being you made a poem about them?

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024

yes, we have ladybugs 😊 they are so cute

Thank you very much, Rosemary. I hope you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You must have gotten a ladybug vibe from me! Some ladybugs are overwintering in my house so I'm feeding them some honey water and lettuce because I don't have aphids. Um. And two got rather romantic today...! I don't want to raise an army of them!

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024

I wrote 'hills' instead of 'heels' but nobody is getting it LoL

Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful day.

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marival