Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Letters"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from royowen
This story is decidedly different from what you normally write, a lot more easy paced and with a languid movement to it, momma concerned about the smell of the ocean, but not so Nomi, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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This story is decidedly different from what you normally write, a lot more easy paced and with a languid movement to it, momma concerned about the smell of the ocean, but not so Nomi, beautifully written Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Nonni and Heddy feel peace on the ocean. Momma feels trapped and cut off. That's my take on it. Thank you so much for this great review and the excellent rating. Gretchen
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Sounds good Gretchen
Comment from Navada
I'm really enjoying reading about Heddy. She has such a natural and instinctive understanding of people and situations. I'm curious to find out who the stranger is. Just a couple of little spag issues in places - their instead of they're and stationary instead of stationery among them. Looking forward to the next installment! :)
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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I'm really enjoying reading about Heddy. She has such a natural and instinctive understanding of people and situations. I'm curious to find out who the stranger is. Just a couple of little spag issues in places - their instead of they're and stationary instead of stationery among them. Looking forward to the next installment! :)
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing again. I really like this story. I am really curious who this man is and what he's hiding from.
She carefully sits down on the sand beside me. (you can omit 'down' it's understood)
Momma is sitting at the dining room table. (passive switch to active, Momma sits at the dining room table.)
New York city (New York City)
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing again. I really like this story. I am really curious who this man is and what he's hiding from.
She carefully sits down on the sand beside me. (you can omit 'down' it's understood)
Momma is sitting at the dining room table. (passive switch to active, Momma sits at the dining room table.)
New York city (New York City)
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you, again, Barbara. Appreciate the grammatical help and the encouragement. Gretchen