Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Heddy, the Fearless"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from royowen
Now his is a very good ending, already you have your readers making guesses s to why the tall red haired man is scared and has asked Heddy not to tell anyone, beautifully read Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Now his is a very good ending, already you have your readers making guesses s to why the tall red haired man is scared and has asked Heddy not to tell anyone, beautifully read Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. The red headed man is hiding from something. I have a clue but it's just a guess. Thank you. Gretchen
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Well done,
Comment from damommy
Ooooo, what's up with this strange man? At least, he didn't harm Heddy. That's a mark in his favor. I was waiting for Nonni to make an appearance. Your details are so good, they make me feel I'm there on the scene, watching.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Ooooo, what's up with this strange man? At least, he didn't harm Heddy. That's a mark in his favor. I was waiting for Nonni to make an appearance. Your details are so good, they make me feel I'm there on the scene, watching.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. All I know is the red headed man will change Heddy's life. Thank you for the encouraging review and the excellent rating. Gretchen
Comment from Sabrina H.
Wow this is an awesome chapter. I definitely have to look up old chapters and keep an eye out for new ones. Also, grammar looked great and the chapter flowed beautifully. Happy New Years.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Wow this is an awesome chapter. I definitely have to look up old chapters and keep an eye out for new ones. Also, grammar looked great and the chapter flowed beautifully. Happy New Years.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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There is only one chapter before it. Still active so you'll get rewarded. Lol. Thank you for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Navada
Ooh! The plot thickens! The reference to the German U boats in the previous chapter leads me to believe this is war time, and if so, a stranger squatting in a house is a fascinating development. More please! :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Ooh! The plot thickens! The reference to the German U boats in the previous chapter leads me to believe this is war time, and if so, a stranger squatting in a house is a fascinating development. More please! :)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm honestly not sure when this is set. War time or possibly just after. When you put a date on a story, there's always that one person who will find a wrong detail. Then you second guess yourself on everything. Thank you again. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
She is a very perceptive little girl, but somehow she doesn't seem afraid of him. Is it that she doesn't know any better, or she has some kind of assurance from Nonni that he isn't to be feared? She does seem to be in a remote place where there aren't any/many children to play with. I like this story.
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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She is a very perceptive little girl, but somehow she doesn't seem afraid of him. Is it that she doesn't know any better, or she has some kind of assurance from Nonni that he isn't to be feared? She does seem to be in a remote place where there aren't any/many children to play with. I like this story.
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked this. She is lonely and knows she's different. But she has a good imagination and "Nonni". Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
That's an ominous ending! Who is he? And where is Dr Monroe? Where is Nonni when she needs her? I love your imaginative stories, witht he superb descriptions so that we can visualise everything perfectly - the sand, the shells, the crabs. And the realistic characters. Well written.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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That's an ominous ending! Who is he? And where is Dr Monroe? Where is Nonni when she needs her? I love your imaginative stories, witht he superb descriptions so that we can visualise everything perfectly - the sand, the shells, the crabs. And the realistic characters. Well written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I'm glad you liked this. Hope you have a happy new year. Gretchen