Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Another lovely poem. You write well. My mailbox is overflowing I have 68 messages alone.
I am getting through them all. I am having to be selfish. If they don't review me at least once a week, or offer me massive points I no longer review them. I don't have the time. Happy Holidays. Karen

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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you so much! :)

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 24-Dec-2023

:-)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think that God offers certainties, the healing of sickness or anything for that matter is dependant on faith, are we forgiven, a resounding yes, unless of course we don't forgive others, the hardest is forgiving ourselves, remember if we are a child of God, we.are equal in heirship with Christ, beautifully written, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you so much, Roy! :)

reply by royowen on 24-Dec-2023

Most welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

I think you can be assured that you are forgiven because that is why Jesus came. Great free verse to express that roller coaster ride of faith throughout life. But we know the end of the ride has already been written. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023

Thank you so much for this lovely feedback and the generous six stars! :)