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Come Follow Me

For all He has done for us, He asks so little in return

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Comment from Austin Yu
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This is so true. Jesus sacrificed so much for us, and all we need to do is put our full trust in him, and we can spend eternity with him. Well written!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Thanks Austin. I am glad you liked this and that you also follow Him.
    It?s always nice to have friends who are Christian authors, yet I love most of them, Christian or not. I am sure by now you are meeting lots of nice people here and I hope it is everything that you had hoped for. Thanks for the very kind words for my Follow me poem, my dear friend. Happy New Year, Austin.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Debi:

This is my first review in almost a year. I couldn't have dreamed of a better place to start. Although I liked your rhyming quatrains individually, it was the theme of Jesus inviting us to come to Him that resonated with me the most.
Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    I thank you with all my heart for the sweetest review and words for my poem about Jesus. I am always thrilled to meet other Christian authors, and appreciate your kindness. Thank you too for your gracious gift of six stars. I look forward to coming your way to see what I have been missing. Thank you again and happy New Year! Debi
Comment from Sarah Sandison
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I absolutely love this poem. I have a very strong faith myself, and your writing is so real and true to what Jesus is. Your style is easy to understand and I smiled from beginning to end. Thank you

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Sarah, I thank you with all my heart for the sweetest review and words for my poem about Jesus. I am always thrilled to meet other Christian authors, and appreciate your kindness. Thank you too for your gracious gift of six stars. I look forward to coming your way to see what I have been missing. Thank you again and happy New Year! Debi
Comment from Mia Twysted
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An easy read, it rolled right off the tongue. I love how you gave three stories in such an impactful way that I felt like I knew each of them and my heart sank for them. Sometimes you just have to trust and continue along the path for that is all you can do.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Mia, I thank you with all my heart for the sweetest review and words for my poem about Jesus. I certainly appreciate your kindness. Thank you again, my dear friend and happy New Year! Debi
Comment from Raul1
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I think Jesus gives us his all and immediate attention. He is God's son and cares for us all. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing! Nice.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Raul, I thank you with all my heart for the kindest review and words for my poem about Jesus. I certainly appreciate your kindness. Thank you again, my dear friend and happy New Year! Debi
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Come Follow Me, has a fun meter as you pick up individuals during their lives and connect them with the God of second and third chances. Nice.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
    Hi Bill, how are you doing? Been thinking about you and hope your wife is doing better. Gosh that has to be hard and I have been praying for all of you.
    Thanks for the kind words dear friend and I wish you a much better new year. God Bless!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Debi.
I read this post a couple of days ago and never responded. I'm so sorry. You know I like to review your promptly.

This poem is so warm and touching, I feel like I know the people of the names mentioned, Sue, the kids, Jill and Tim. Each story culminated by the words, 'come follow me'. And at the end, giving Jesus all their baggage.

Sad poem but true. But should not sadden the reader because of the uplifting spirit and words.

I hope your Christmas cheer gave you smiles...
John

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Hi John, and thank you from the bottom of my heart for these very kind words for my Jesus poem. I hope you know you are the best, and I appreciate your friendship so very much. Thank you also for the generous six stars, and I wish you and Debbie the happiest New Year ever. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Oooh, one more thing John. I have been meaning to ask you where I would find the Mummer?s string band playing in Philadelphia on NY Day? Is it ABC, CBS or what time?? Lorraine says they play every year there. I would love to see that.
reply by jmdg1954 on 27-Dec-2023
    I googled tv telecast and it seems to be carried by affiliates to ABC.

    I marched with the Avalon String Band way back in the day.

    They?re still marching.

    Thank you for your interest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    I will be in touch after i watch then. And I will picture you out there with your banjo!!
    You as Frankie Avalon playing banjo!! I love it. LOL
reply by jmdg1954 on 27-Dec-2023
    Ha... And about 55 years younger.. Holy Canolli!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    😉
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Hey John, what year did you march in Philadelphia parade
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    I found live video of 1969 if you send me your email I will send it to you.
reply by jmdg1954 on 31-Dec-2023
    Oh of course?
    jmd12145@comcast.net

    Cool.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
    Sorry. I couldn?t get it to work but I am going to send you something else. A belated Christmas Smashup.
    But as far as the parade, I?m watching that tomorrow.
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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Stunning. I am completely blown away. I just love the delivery of this profound message. It had a musical quality (which you always manage to achieve) and flowed beautifully. This one had me emotional, my Debi!! Love, love, love this exceptional write by an exceptional you! Xoxoxo

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Jess, I should be more surprised that we were on the same page again at the precise time, but that would be looking a gift horse in the mouth. (And if you never heard that saying, please let me know because I know it sounds strange) But nothing we do together would surprise me. I hope the girls enjoy the music Also your lovely words are so sweet and so very appreciated. Thank you also for the honor of your six stars. You are such a special friend. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Happy New Year to your entire family.
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is beautiful, Debi. You've outdone yourself.
Just out of curiosity: are the people in your poem real or made-up? You don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Thanks for sharing your talent and for cheering me up. This is what I needed to read right now.
I hope you are doing well. xxx

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    Heather, what a lovely delight to hear from you. Thank you for all the kind comments and of course I don?t mind telling that all three situations were made up. Later I thought how easy it would be to use ones of my own issues with health and other less problems, but no, I just made it up as I went. Of course not the part about Jesus. Thank you also for the gift of six stars my very sweet friend. I appreciate it so much and I wish you all from my home to yours a happy New Year. Love. Debi
reply by Heather Knight on 27-Dec-2023
    xxx
Comment from artisart4u
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It is nice how you had three examples of incidents that could destroy a person's self esteem but if you know that the Lord's loves you and is with you through your ups and downs, you can get through it without harming yourself. In other words, it is good know the Lord in order to have inner peace.
As I read online God had One muse, his Son.

This is written very well

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
    I thank you with all my heart for the sweetest review and words for my poem about Jesus. I am always thrilled to meet other Christian authors, and appreciate your kindness. Thank you too for your gracious gift of six stars. I look forward to coming your way to see what I have been missing. Thank you again and happy New Year! Debi