Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "The Shore"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are a tease Lea as you left us in suspense here. I loved this chapter, despite the sadness in being homeless and your obvious tiredness with nowhere to go, there was hope in your thought process. Let's hope that P will help you. A clever post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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You are a tease Lea as you left us in suspense here. I loved this chapter, despite the sadness in being homeless and your obvious tiredness with nowhere to go, there was hope in your thought process. Let's hope that P will help you. A clever post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly I appreciate this so very much again I apologize for my late reply I was in much pain I still am but a little bit better thank you again for your kind comments I hope you had a good Christmas and that your new year will be great too have a wonderful day!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
"Mam?"
Someone was shaking my shoulder.
"Mam, we're closing soon.
Ma'am - just a slight correction.
Groggily,
Shivering,
So,
all missing commas
otherwise - lets get rolling - P had better help you!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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"Mam?"
Someone was shaking my shoulder.
"Mam, we're closing soon.
Ma'am - just a slight correction.
Groggily,
Shivering,
So,
all missing commas
otherwise - lets get rolling - P had better help you!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your awesome review and for your fine rating. I'm pleased that you liked it. I took your edits and made those corrections. Thank you for those. They are gold. I appreciate all that you say and do and for your time as well. I hope you have a great evening!