Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

gorgeous artistry again. The words in your poem express the feeling of loss and desire. When I authored my novels a while back, romance came to me in bits and pieces, but lately the words are not flattering like you write.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Austin Yu

Excellent

Yay, I finally get to review another one of your amazing pieces of work! I especially liked "echo on my skin, tangled with dying embers." Sometimes when love fleets, there will be parts of the affection that die down. However, there will always be that echo that constantly remind you of how things were, and I think that's the hardest part of letting go. Good luck :)

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

The dual pictures was wonderful, Gypsy. Your words were amazing, they flowed together. Such a sad poem! Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 21-Dec-2023

You are greatly welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from Richard's Opus

Excellent

The author has composed a heartfelt ode to a broken relationship. These lines scan like the lyrics to a song about lost love. Someone should set them to music.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Another sweet, beautiful piece. Once again you have proven that you are the master of matching up the most perfect pictures to your beautiful words.

I like the image of a 'touch echoing in the mind'.

Most enjoyable!
Douglas


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 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I really enjoyed this piece. You have used very poetic words and your structure is very good. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful holiday season that may God richly bless you with good things.

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 Comment Written 20-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good night.

Gypsy hugs