Unrestrained
Couplet24 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Well, I see and hear your internal rhyme, Melissa. Still, I'm pondering your couplet, trying to understand your meaning. I assume you mean that Time is there always and moves through rich and poor. Later in life, when gray heads are all about we wish we could get some more Time. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Well, I see and hear your internal rhyme, Melissa. Still, I'm pondering your couplet, trying to understand your meaning. I assume you mean that Time is there always and moves through rich and poor. Later in life, when gray heads are all about we wish we could get some more Time. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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You got the meaning right, Jose. Having to fit in the internal rhymes and make
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our time runs our eventually and some have more time than others and it is the luck of the draw. A fine couplet for the contest, I wish you luck Melissa, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Our time runs our eventually and some have more time than others and it is the luck of the draw. A fine couplet for the contest, I wish you luck Melissa, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Jacob1395
What your poem shows is that no matter our status, we are all on the same journey and that time rules over all of us. A well written piece, I thought your writing flowed well and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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What your poem shows is that no matter our status, we are all on the same journey and that time rules over all of us. A well written piece, I thought your writing flowed well and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Hello Jacob. Thank you very much.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Absolutely true! This is a perfect description of how time flows - appearing to be endless and yet we humans are mortal and often "time is not our friend." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Absolutely true! This is a perfect description of how time flows - appearing to be endless and yet we humans are mortal and often "time is not our friend." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Hi Helen. Thanks so much!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Excellent work with this. Great job with the internal rhyme. I like your comparison to waves flowing to the shore. Time is ever moving, and we can't change it. We all have regrets that we haven't made the most of our time on earth. You express an excellent thought in this, and success to you in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Excellent work with this. Great job with the internal rhyme. I like your comparison to waves flowing to the shore. Time is ever moving, and we can't change it. We all have regrets that we haven't made the most of our time on earth. You express an excellent thought in this, and success to you in the contest. judi
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much Judi! Much appreciated, my friend. There are a lot of good verses in this contest. Fun to read and reflect on everyone's different points of view.
Melissa
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You're welcome. This is been an interesting series of contests. So far, I've entered just the first. judi
Comment from JSD
Ditto with this one. Another complicated form that you have responded to with excellent ideas and expression. Important and telling points made about time and its progress. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Ditto with this one. Another complicated form that you have responded to with excellent ideas and expression. Important and telling points made about time and its progress. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you again!!! Your review has made my day!
Melissa
Comment from Navada
I really like your exploration of Time's unceasing nature. There are some elegant rhymes and some profound commentary. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I really like your exploration of Time's unceasing nature. There are some elegant rhymes and some profound commentary. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much Nevada!
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I like this a lot. You're right that Time does not differentiate between social classes...or ANYTHING, actually. And I have definitely arrived at that point where I'm wishing Time were still my friend.
Wonderful couplet. I hope it does well for you at the polls. xo
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I like this a lot. You're right that Time does not differentiate between social classes...or ANYTHING, actually. And I have definitely arrived at that point where I'm wishing Time were still my friend.
Wonderful couplet. I hope it does well for you at the polls. xo
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much Rachelle. I am finding some time today to do the thing I love ~ write verses. I really should be preparing for Christmas, but it seems the words will flow ~ today, anyway :). Hugs, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
This is going to be a hard contest. Yours, of course, is wonderful. I wouldn't expect any less. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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This is going to be a hard contest. Yours, of course, is wonderful. I wouldn't expect any less. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your lovely review sweet Sal. Hugs.
Melissa
Comment from royowen
As a mortal being I would have thought would be our enemy, stalking us as it were, always not knowing how much we have as our share, but in eternity we would see the reason why it exists, beautifully written Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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As a mortal being I would have thought would be our enemy, stalking us as it were, always not knowing how much we have as our share, but in eternity we would see the reason why it exists, beautifully written Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you Roy. Time can be an enemy or friend. Our Lord knows what is best and takes us through our years hand in hand. Hugs.
Melissa
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Well done