Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

The words are enough to paint a picture in one's mind of the extent of the passion ignited by the kiss. It sounds smouldering lust and roaring flame and powerful and make this a great entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thanks so much, Beth. :)

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Well it's a very long time since I experienced such fire lol. You have managed to express your thoughts metaphorically in this well written one line piece of poetry. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

Thank you, Wendyanne - it's been a long time for me, too! :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It sounds "hot" and you used the fire metaphor well to express this passionate kiss. But I wonder if he should lay off the hot sauce (just kidding) Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 18-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023

HA! I love that idea! I do hope she isn't allergic ... :)

reply by lyenochka on 18-Dec-2023

😊