2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Christmas at the Park".
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Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. So many people are trying to make as much out of Christmas and New Years Day. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. So many people are trying to make as much out of Christmas and New Years Day. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The words are so meaningful in this poem. Can you imagine how this little boy felt when he hung his ornaments on the tree so everyone could see what he had made? They were his keepsakes.
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The words are so meaningful in this poem. Can you imagine how this little boy felt when he hung his ornaments on the tree so everyone could see what he had made? They were his keepsakes.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww sweet little poem of a little kid hanging up his ornaments...
smooth flow and good imagery
nice concrete tree, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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aww sweet little poem of a little kid hanging up his ornaments...
smooth flow and good imagery
nice concrete tree, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Marival,
well, for me you engage your reader with an impactful statement with your first two words.
The meaning which allows the true nature of what we all should be celebrating. The simplicity in the illumination of God's love
Such a beautiful visually composed poem MariVal.
With the word of Jesus we all can join in creating such a light... an avenue with the purest of intent.
Stunning!
All the very best in this contest dear friend... a great Christmas message!
With our thoughts we create...
the power of nature's church.
Warmest regards,
James.
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Hi Marival,
well, for me you engage your reader with an impactful statement with your first two words.
The meaning which allows the true nature of what we all should be celebrating. The simplicity in the illumination of God's love
Such a beautiful visually composed poem MariVal.
With the word of Jesus we all can join in creating such a light... an avenue with the purest of intent.
Stunning!
All the very best in this contest dear friend... a great Christmas message!
With our thoughts we create...
the power of nature's church.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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nature's church... i like that
James, is so good to hear from you, I am happy you like my little poem. Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Con carino,
MariVal
"not everyone can do great things, but everyone can do things with great love" - Mother Teresa
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely worded and beautifully presented. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. God bless. Patricia.
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This is very nicely worded and beautifully presented. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous new year. God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautifully expressed little free verse contrasting the light of the world with the humble gesture of a child celebrating the season. A poignant and moving scene. Well done, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie
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A beautifully expressed little free verse contrasting the light of the world with the humble gesture of a child celebrating the season. A poignant and moving scene. Well done, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Gypsy, as the darkness light takes on a different perspective, however small, it takes authority over the darkness, the dark cannot exist where light is present, blessings Roy
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Beautifully written Gypsy, as the darkness light takes on a different perspective, however small, it takes authority over the darkness, the dark cannot exist where light is present, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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You too
Comment from lyenochka
This is a perfect poem for the Christmas poetry contest!
It's not the electrical light that lights up our hearts but Jesus Who is the Light of the World.
Great job with this!
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This is a perfect poem for the Christmas poetry contest!
It's not the electrical light that lights up our hearts but Jesus Who is the Light of the World.
Great job with this!
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
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Big sister, thank you very much! May you have a wonderful weekend.
love,
MariVal
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