One Man's Calling
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
If Ben is dying, then how God will continue his wonders if his devotee is gone? I hope you have some kind of miracle up your sleeve to save him:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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If Ben is dying, then how God will continue his wonders if his devotee is gone? I hope you have some kind of miracle up your sleeve to save him:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Gunner Lil
One of the best chapters I've read here.
An easy read with a wonderful pace. Great dialogue, smooth and real.
This reader wants more.
Found one type o. 'many ounces of milk Ben would take.'
Thank you!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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One of the best chapters I've read here.
An easy read with a wonderful pace. Great dialogue, smooth and real.
This reader wants more.
Found one type o. 'many ounces of milk Ben would take.'
Thank you!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the great review.
My capitalizing finger needs fired. I'm constantly going back to cap stuff. GRRRRR!
Comment from prettybluebirds
I Hope you do contiue this story for another chapter. We readers deserve to be present when Ben passes on, if he does. This chapter is touching and nicely executed. I look forward to the conclusion of the story.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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I Hope you do contiue this story for another chapter. We readers deserve to be present when Ben passes on, if he does. This chapter is touching and nicely executed. I look forward to the conclusion of the story.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Absolutely another chapter. I was referencing beyond that.
Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
Well it certainly looks like Ben is going through the throes of his last minutes on Earth, and he's recalling his faith filled past, stories that will be stored in the annals and antiquities of Heaven, this is beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Well it certainly looks like Ben is going through the throes of his last minutes on Earth, and he's recalling his faith filled past, stories that will be stored in the annals and antiquities of Heaven, this is beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, with the words "He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her" coming to mind. Her, or him, or anyone without sin or an immoral minute are persons I've never known. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Well, with the words "He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her" coming to mind. Her, or him, or anyone without sin or an immoral minute are persons I've never known. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind review.