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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another birthday tribute, this time to Willie! Happy Birthay, Willie! What an incredibly full and productive life to date. I'm still trying to absorb the number of great grandchildren! A sincere and very informative post, Debi, of which I'm sure Willie will be very proud! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Debbie, thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie?s poem. He is an amazing man and I know he will appreciate kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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another great birthday greeting poem for another fan story poet friend. I like Willie's poems often written in a simple cowboy poetry style. and I like that he writes in cursive too.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Jake, thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie's poem. He is an amazing man and I know he will appreciate kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Exceptional sonnet, very good rhyme and meter beat. Willie sounds like a wonderful person.

I love the imagery in your poem. Good rhyming that doesn't sound forced and flows nicely.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    MariVal, thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie?s poem. He is an amazing man and I know he will appreciate kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from gramalot8
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This was a great tribute to this man for his many years of service.
Sounds life he unselfishly spent his life serving others nit only in the military but law enforcement as well. Happy Birthdays greetings with thanks is definitely warranted,

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Gramolot, thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie?poem. He is an amazing man and I know he will appreciate kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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As always, a thoughtful birthday wish, giving us a chance to get to know Willie P. Smith a little better. To you, a thank you for writing this poem. For Willie, thank you for your service, and a wish for many birthdays blessings.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Glenda, thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie?s poem. He is an amazing man and I know he will appreciate kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Debi, you have written an awesome fellow. I have read several of his poems, and they are always worth reading. I also appreciate his service to the country and his city. Thank you for providing all the details. Excellent. Terry.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Terry, almost caught up. But thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie?s poem. He is an amazing man and I know he appreciated the kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing Willie P Smith with us. I don't know how I've missed this amazing man, but I sure have. I am going to have to search him out. Again, you're doing us a service.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Barb, thanks for the lovely review and comments for Willie?s poem. He is an amazing man and I know he will appreciate kind birthday wishes too. Thanks my sweet friend!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful birthday poem you have penned for Willie! He is a very nice man and great writer. I thank him for his service. Thank you for sharing my friend! love and blessings! Happy Happy birthday Willie!!!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Hi Teri, I cannot thank you enough for such a kind review and comments for Willie's poem. I just found out that Willie has been sick the last few days and it has him down in bed. So he hasn't even seen his poem yet. Let's pray he will get better soon.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Another fine birthday poem, Debi. I just finished reviewing one of Willie's poems. I am surprised at his age. I would have guessed him to be younger.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Hi Paul, I cannot thank you enough for such a kind review and comments for Willie's poem. I just found out that Willie has been sick the last few days and it has him down in bed. So he hasn't even seen his poem yet. Let's pray he will get better soon.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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You never falter, my sweet lady!

I didn't realize Willie was that age, and God bless him. I hope I make it! LOL.

Anyway, Happy Birthday, Willie. Thank you for your career as an officer and for your service in the Navy and reserves. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Hi John, I cannot thank you enough for such a kind review and comments for Willie's poem. I just found out that Willie has been sick the last few days and it has him down in bed. So he hasn't even seen his poem yet. Let's pray he will get better soon.
    Thanks again, my dear friend.