Passion For Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Fist"Book 3 of assorted poems
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Comment from thoughtgame2
Only because I have read a lot of your short poems do I get the strength in these 8 words. Another may not. But that's cool,because I don't think we as poets care to much about what another thinks of our work, during our work in progress moment's. We just need to put it out of our mind and into the void a.S.A.P. Very well thought out, and the lady looks, the part you speak of...fist. Great job...really.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Only because I have read a lot of your short poems do I get the strength in these 8 words. Another may not. But that's cool,because I don't think we as poets care to much about what another thinks of our work, during our work in progress moment's. We just need to put it out of our mind and into the void a.S.A.P. Very well thought out, and the lady looks, the part you speak of...fist. Great job...really.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you again. My friend always awesome to see you here. I'm glad you're in for the read. And I appreciate your review and your awesome rating. May the force be with you!
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you welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very poignant poem in a words, or less the image you put with it clearly shows that there was some abuse going on because of a deceitful fist. I wish you the best in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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This is a very poignant poem in a words, or less the image you put with it clearly shows that there was some abuse going on because of a deceitful fist. I wish you the best in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm glad you like it's a subject that I am personally familiar with. Thank you for your time and your great review. I appreciate it very much. I hope your day is fantastic!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and women can occasionally be under this illusion Lea, I wish you luck with the contest, well chosen words for domestic abuse, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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A poignant write and women can occasionally be under this illusion Lea, I wish you luck with the contest, well chosen words for domestic abuse, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly i'm glad you liked it!
Cheers!