Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Mr. D. Part 1"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from BethShelby
Am I understanding that his wife has brought others to stay in bacement before. for his sexual pleasure. I sounds like he is angry that you get involved when he tries to hurt is wife and he doesn't like that either. I anxious to see how you will respond to this.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Am I understanding that his wife has brought others to stay in bacement before. for his sexual pleasure. I sounds like he is angry that you get involved when he tries to hurt is wife and he doesn't like that either. I anxious to see how you will respond to this.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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That is a very good question to this day. I'm not really sure. I only know the events when I was there. But you are right. There's clear indications in that direction. Thank you for asking as always. Thank you for your review your kind comments. And i'm always happy to see you here I hope you have the best day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your opening poem is shakespearean Lea!
After the pandemic when I managed finally to return to England after 18 months away from home, the first thing I did was take off my shoes and socks and walk bare foot in the park to feet the grass and earth beneath my feet in England, as we landed from the air and I saw the green fields, I cried.
As I read your story Lea, I was in shock! Oh my goodness, this is just not acceptable. I thin I would have found a frying pan to hit him! But you were calm and pragmatic and the way to survive is not to fight at that moment, but to make a plan and make it work.
Another fine chapter Lea in your continuing story of abuse in your life. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Your opening poem is shakespearean Lea!
After the pandemic when I managed finally to return to England after 18 months away from home, the first thing I did was take off my shoes and socks and walk bare foot in the park to feet the grass and earth beneath my feet in England, as we landed from the air and I saw the green fields, I cried.
As I read your story Lea, I was in shock! Oh my goodness, this is just not acceptable. I thin I would have found a frying pan to hit him! But you were calm and pragmatic and the way to survive is not to fight at that moment, but to make a plan and make it work.
Another fine chapter Lea in your continuing story of abuse in your life. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you again, Dolly for sharing with me. I can understand the feelings related to that time of your life. I'm glad you are here today and doing well. Thank you for your review. Thank you and reading. I am most appreciative. Have a great day!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see what happens next. This is another good write. This needs to be published.
saw Mrs. D looking at me either aconcerned and ('concerned', but I've no idea why 'either' is in this sentence, you're not comparing anything)
"What did he have to say this time?" I thought now that my head (thought should be in italics)
"He say, joo can be...sucker of cock." (another person speaking, should be a separate paragraph)
"I turned my gaze to the kitchen window as I (omit quotation marks)
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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I can't wait to see what happens next. This is another good write. This needs to be published.
saw Mrs. D looking at me either aconcerned and ('concerned', but I've no idea why 'either' is in this sentence, you're not comparing anything)
"What did he have to say this time?" I thought now that my head (thought should be in italics)
"He say, joo can be...sucker of cock." (another person speaking, should be a separate paragraph)
"I turned my gaze to the kitchen window as I (omit quotation marks)
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hi Barbara, thank you again. I've gone ahead and made those changes as well. You are a very much wonderful help. Thank you. I thank you for your review too. It precious to me as well as your advice thanks again have a great day!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I found myself focusing on the words 'not as scary as it would have been had I not experienced it before'. I think you become acclimatized to fear and abuse to a certain extent. Thus you coped. You are doing a good job with this trilogy. Keep up the good work. kay
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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I found myself focusing on the words 'not as scary as it would have been had I not experienced it before'. I think you become acclimatized to fear and abuse to a certain extent. Thus you coped. You are doing a good job with this trilogy. Keep up the good work. kay
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Hi Kay, thank you very much for reading. Thank you so much for your review as well. I appreciate it! I hope you have the best day!