One Man's Calling
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Comment from tfawcus
This is getting interesting! It looks as if Ben is going to be given a good deal of aggravation by Soapy. Your narrative and setting feel authentic and well researched. I'm curious to find what happens next.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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This is getting interesting! It looks as if Ben is going to be given a good deal of aggravation by Soapy. Your narrative and setting feel authentic and well researched. I'm curious to find what happens next.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
I was amazed to learn that Soapy began his sordid career in Creede, where 'One Man's Calling' started (basically). I should probably do a rewrite making him a recurring antagonist.
Comment from JSD
You play as footloose as you like. I'm not one to complain. More excellent conflict and resolution set out here, Wayne. Always enjoyable. Thanks for continuing to share.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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You play as footloose as you like. I'm not one to complain. More excellent conflict and resolution set out here, Wayne. Always enjoyable. Thanks for continuing to share.
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.