Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Suspense"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
I thought the story about the angel was funny. I didn't realize the family you were staying with was Indian. I thought they may have been oriental for some reason. I didn't realize that the Indian culture allowed spousal abuse. That's unfortunate to say the least. Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Hello Lea,
I thought the story about the angel was funny. I didn't realize the family you were staying with was Indian. I thought they may have been oriental for some reason. I didn't realize that the Indian culture allowed spousal abuse. That's unfortunate to say the least. Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 06-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Tom, yes. Unfortunately, they do have a different rules for women in Eastern Europe and Eastern Asia. Certainly do thank you so much again for your review Tom! I'm glad You're reading along with me. Appreciate it so much. Hope you have a great evening too God bless!
Comment from BethShelby
I wouldn't want to marry someone from India. Women are like slaves to thier man. They have strange rules. He can beat his wife but not his sons. I wander what he is allowed to do to a stranger in his house. I was about to go to bed. I glad I caught this. I enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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I wouldn't want to marry someone from India. Women are like slaves to thier man. They have strange rules. He can beat his wife but not his sons. I wander what he is allowed to do to a stranger in his house. I was about to go to bed. I glad I caught this. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you best appreciate you as always. Yes, I wouldn't want to marry one either. I don't like being a sub citizen. That is not my thing I would not last a day in that! Thank you my friend for your reviews and for always knowing exactly what's going on!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Very, very well done, Lea. You've begun to let us see what's behind Mrs. D's curtain. It's chilling, but she's lucky to have you. Someone who hadn't had your level of experience with the situation might just baled on her. And you've made it interesting to see how differently you're reacting when you're not the one on the receiving end of the abuse. You become the protector.
One teeny spag is all I see (and this reminds me: do you notice how much better your editing is becoming? That's no small accomplishment. You're such a fast learner, Lea. xo
I found myself going to it **TIME** [tiny] and again.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Very, very well done, Lea. You've begun to let us see what's behind Mrs. D's curtain. It's chilling, but she's lucky to have you. Someone who hadn't had your level of experience with the situation might just baled on her. And you've made it interesting to see how differently you're reacting when you're not the one on the receiving end of the abuse. You become the protector.
One teeny spag is all I see (and this reminds me: do you notice how much better your editing is becoming? That's no small accomplishment. You're such a fast learner, Lea. xo
I found myself going to it **TIME** [tiny] and again.
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2023
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Thank you, my kind lady. I certainly have. I appreciate your kind edit. I'm glad you're liking the punctuation better I'm learning. Thank you for noticing. Thank you for all your kind reviews thank you for everything!
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It is always my pleasure. xo