2023 Gypsy's Clubs
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Kiss Me".
15 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I knew it sounded familiar. Shakespeare said, "Everything has been written, everything has been said. Surely by now, that is true. You did this quite well. Karen
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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I knew it sounded familiar. Shakespeare said, "Everything has been written, everything has been said. Surely by now, that is true. You did this quite well. Karen
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Have a good week. Karen
Comment from lyenochka
You did a great job here, MariVal. I liked how you were inspired by Solomon's Song of Songs and I could recognize the allusions to the tastes, scents, and sensations which he used in his book. I knew you'd understand his poetry better than me!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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You did a great job here, MariVal. I liked how you were inspired by Solomon's Song of Songs and I could recognize the allusions to the tastes, scents, and sensations which he used in his book. I knew you'd understand his poetry better than me!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you, big sister. Your kind feedback on this one means a lot to me. Thank you. I really enjoyed reading it and making it my own. Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review.
Love
Marival
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful poem about love. I like all the metaphors you used, "sweet wine, "pearls", "sun shine" and "berries." The color of this poem is amazing. Love the last artwork.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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What a beautiful poem about love. I like all the metaphors you used, "sweet wine, "pearls", "sun shine" and "berries." The color of this poem is amazing. Love the last artwork.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Another very passionate post, with strong passionate language with a great persuasive narrative to reveal the heated rhetoric to complete the poem, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : The graceful (curb) curve?
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Another very passionate post, with strong passionate language with a great persuasive narrative to reveal the heated rhetoric to complete the poem, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : The graceful (curb) curve?
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I changed it to curve, thank you!
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well done and congratulations on this one mate. It is a tantalizing read from moment one. Your words sing to me and the presentation is gorgeous. Good luck.
Kiwi
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Well done and congratulations on this one mate. It is a tantalizing read from moment one. Your words sing to me and the presentation is gorgeous. Good luck.
Kiwi
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2023
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Thank you, mate,
I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Best wishes, kiwi (*÷*)
