A Particular Friendship
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Hallway"We meet Lizzy who has just come out of the convent
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Comment from patcelaw
It does very much sound like your childhood was pretty normal. I had brothers and sisters. I had to two sisters that were older and one sister who was younger and I had five brothers when I was growing up only ones were four brothers and two sisters that I really remember very well because most of the older ones were already away from home. I enjoyed your story very much and some of the antics that your brother and you played was revealing. Thank you so much for sharing this lonely story with us. Patricia.
By the way, did you see the new work that I put up that has a new format to it? It is called an acrostitch. God gave me this new format for writing prose during my sleep. Check it out. You might find it very challenging to jtry. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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It does very much sound like your childhood was pretty normal. I had brothers and sisters. I had to two sisters that were older and one sister who was younger and I had five brothers when I was growing up only ones were four brothers and two sisters that I really remember very well because most of the older ones were already away from home. I enjoyed your story very much and some of the antics that your brother and you played was revealing. Thank you so much for sharing this lonely story with us. Patricia.
By the way, did you see the new work that I put up that has a new format to it? It is called an acrostitch. God gave me this new format for writing prose during my sleep. Check it out. You might find it very challenging to jtry. Patricia.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you for your sincere review. I will check your new post out. Thank you for the heads up