Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Window"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
16 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I missed you over the weekend. I always go to you story first. Now that you left us hanging with a crash and a scream, I hope you want keep us waiting. If I were you, I'd have my DNA done to see who really is your father. It aways turns up relatives,
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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I missed you over the weekend. I always go to you story first. Now that you left us hanging with a crash and a scream, I hope you want keep us waiting. If I were you, I'd have my DNA done to see who really is your father. It aways turns up relatives,
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Really nice to see you here! Yes, I had to take a couple days clean out my brain. Lol. Thank you again for your fine review. And yes, I will certainly have testing done absolutely. But I think it also indicates another thing that my mother is not like. Grandfather's biological child doesn't surprise me so many are not in my family. Thank you so very much again for hanging in there with me. I appreciate seeing you here and offering your comments and your fine review. Thank you so much!
Comment from JSD
You love mountains, don't you!
Oh for goodness sake. You take us through the mill! We were just relaxing with you and then there is a classic cliffhanger alarm. Aargh!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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You love mountains, don't you!
Oh for goodness sake. You take us through the mill! We were just relaxing with you and then there is a classic cliffhanger alarm. Aargh!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023
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Yes, I know I'm sorry. I was so Naive in those days. I didn't know what was what was anything really. I don't stumbling around in the dark. Thank you so much for reading and I'll bring your interesting comment that made me kind of smile. Thank you have a great night!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm so gratified that things are getting calmer for you, at least in your story. There's hope that you might be able to get one rung up that ladder to some kind of tenuous stability. Your introduction is an absolute joy to read in your celebration of nature, the mountains and the forest. How insignificant we seem in comparison, a theme always apparent in your writing. There are some small edits: belong(ed) to his father; couple (of) times; I apprec(iate) nature. But, oh dear, another cliff-hanger! Thanks for sharing, Lea. Your story continues, as ever, so engagingly. I wish you luck. Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I'm so gratified that things are getting calmer for you, at least in your story. There's hope that you might be able to get one rung up that ladder to some kind of tenuous stability. Your introduction is an absolute joy to read in your celebration of nature, the mountains and the forest. How insignificant we seem in comparison, a theme always apparent in your writing. There are some small edits: belong(ed) to his father; couple (of) times; I apprec(iate) nature. But, oh dear, another cliff-hanger! Thanks for sharing, Lea. Your story continues, as ever, so engagingly. I wish you luck. Debbie
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Debbie, thank you for your suggestions for edit. Thank you for reading as always it's a pleasure to have you! Your reviews always means a lot to me. And I hope you have the best evening!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Lea,
Well, it sounds like things might be looking up. With the exception of the last line, which was a bit troubling. You were really overdue for some good things in your life gal. I love the picture you took. Everywhere I look around here there is snow, which has a beauty of its own, but I like seeing green. Nice job gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Hello Lea,
Well, it sounds like things might be looking up. With the exception of the last line, which was a bit troubling. You were really overdue for some good things in your life gal. I love the picture you took. Everywhere I look around here there is snow, which has a beauty of its own, but I like seeing green. Nice job gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you Tom you're in a beautiful part of the world too! I'm happy To see you here and to see your reviews, I do I appreciate you reading along Hanging in there with me. Thank you again. You're fine with you and fine rating. I hope you have a blessed evening as well!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Where ever we go in life, we have to avoid trouble and it is a matter of learning the basic rules and having an instinct to run when we need to. It sounds like you are starting to make friends with some decent people Lea and you have found yourself a job. Your accommodation does not sound very safe and your last line is worrying.
This is a great line:
Perhaps malevolence is its placenta.
Another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Where ever we go in life, we have to avoid trouble and it is a matter of learning the basic rules and having an instinct to run when we need to. It sounds like you are starting to make friends with some decent people Lea and you have found yourself a job. Your accommodation does not sound very safe and your last line is worrying.
This is a great line:
Perhaps malevolence is its placenta.
Another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, I'm so glad you liked it and I'm always happy to receive your review. Cuz you are so amazingly talented anything you say means a lot to me! I was wondering about that wine whether or not I hate to use it but It was too tantalizingly weird not to use it.lol thank you!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Why did you put these chapter together as a book? But these chapter are considered as book chapters. You will have to create a book and add these to it.
I enjoy reading your prose and poems. The last these paragraphs were so emotional. I also had a very messy and difficult childhood. Hugs. We both survived it.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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Why did you put these chapter together as a book? But these chapter are considered as book chapters. You will have to create a book and add these to it.
I enjoy reading your prose and poems. The last these paragraphs were so emotional. I also had a very messy and difficult childhood. Hugs. We both survived it.
Well done.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023
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I'm sorry you went through that. I really am. I don't wish it on even my worst enemy. Thank you again I appreciate having you alone for the ride. I appreciate you very much! Yes I do have a part of a book called Spectre part 2. Thank you again my fine friend have a fabulous night!