Miranda's Trouble In Paradise
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Comment from Wendy G
Another excellent chapter with realistic characters described well. Miranda is a quick thinker to relieve her ex of his money so skilfully. Just like her, in a good way. And yes, Mitch has her back - he's a keeper.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Another excellent chapter with realistic characters described well. Miranda is a quick thinker to relieve her ex of his money so skilfully. Just like her, in a good way. And yes, Mitch has her back - he's a keeper.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you for this nice review, Wendy. I'm so glad you liked this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a lively post Gretchen, love your realistic scenes that throw me into the heart of your story as if I am there in that club watching and listening. A joy to read and we are a bit further along in your story here, a talented post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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This is a lively post Gretchen, love your realistic scenes that throw me into the heart of your story as if I am there in that club watching and listening. A joy to read and we are a bit further along in your story here, a talented post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thanks, Dolly. I'm so glad it read clearly for you. I really appreciate thos kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
Miranda is a real character ,She grabs money from her ex and returns Mitch's money ans plans to give the rest back to his wife... and she is also trying to find her friend's two timing husband!
i am enjoying this..
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Miranda is a real character ,She grabs money from her ex and returns Mitch's money ans plans to give the rest back to his wife... and she is also trying to find her friend's two timing husband!
i am enjoying this..
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Hey! Later in the week and still have a SIX for you. I loved this. Full of new surprises and I felt like I was in the club there with you. No spags, thanks again.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Hey! Later in the week and still have a SIX for you. I loved this. Full of new surprises and I felt like I was in the club there with you. No spags, thanks again.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you for this extra star. I'm glad you felt like you were there, but I hope you weren't peeking. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is well written and entertaining. Miranda is on the job to save her friend from a husband who's spending time in a strip joint, but I suspect he is innocent. It is very funny when Mitch runs into his daughter's old friend. It totally ruins looking at the strippers for him.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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This is well written and entertaining. Miranda is on the job to save her friend from a husband who's spending time in a strip joint, but I suspect he is innocent. It is very funny when Mitch runs into his daughter's old friend. It totally ruins looking at the strippers for him.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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It would be unnerving to see one of your children's friends almost completely naked. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another great chapter here, Gretchen! This was always going to be a fun visit and your descriptive detail brought the place skilfully to life. Added to which we have humour and a possible lead for Miranda. Dialogue, as ever, excellently done, building character, particularly Farley. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Another great chapter here, Gretchen! This was always going to be a fun visit and your descriptive detail brought the place skilfully to life. Added to which we have humour and a possible lead for Miranda. Dialogue, as ever, excellently done, building character, particularly Farley. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thank you so very much. I'm glad you are enjoying this story. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so glad you posted tonight, I knew it would be good. Miranda comes to life the way you write her, and all the other characters. They come across so natural. Well you got in to the town's hottest nightclub and got away with it nicely. Lol, she was well rid of her ex, but didn't get much else from the club. Another geat chapter!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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I'm so glad you posted tonight, I knew it would be good. Miranda comes to life the way you write her, and all the other characters. They come across so natural. Well you got in to the town's hottest nightclub and got away with it nicely. Lol, she was well rid of her ex, but didn't get much else from the club. Another geat chapter!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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I didn't realize until today that Farley has only been mentioned in passing. I really appreciate this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Oh yes the modern girl appears half dressed and wonders why drunken put their paws all over them, it sounds like the bars haven't changed much, fancy that, I spent a big chunk of my life in those places, glad I don't anymore, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Oh yes the modern girl appears half dressed and wonders why drunken put their paws all over them, it sounds like the bars haven't changed much, fancy that, I spent a big chunk of my life in those places, glad I don't anymore, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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I think only the music changes in them. Thanks so much, Roy. Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh so true Miranda, Mitch will always have your back. You did a great job writing this. I wish I had a six star left. I would surely give this post one. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Oh so true Miranda, Mitch will always have your back. You did a great job writing this. I wish I had a six star left. I would surely give this post one. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Thanks so much, Barbara. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Six not necessary but feedback is always welcomed. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
This was an interesting outing. Mitch doesn't seem at all happy about being at this place. I would think if Rita's Bill was working as a janator, she would know.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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This was an interesting outing. Mitch doesn't seem at all happy about being at this place. I would think if Rita's Bill was working as a janator, she would know.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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He has his reasons for not telling her. Secrets are never good. Gretchen