Spectre
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Comment from BethShelby
I'm wondering how people were able to get in touch with you. I would doubt if your folks would be paying for a phone for you. I don't know if people had cell phones then. Maybe you had the phone of the place where you was staying. Did any job you applied for sound promising? The guy that spilled your fries sounds neat.
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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I'm wondering how people were able to get in touch with you. I would doubt if your folks would be paying for a phone for you. I don't know if people had cell phones then. Maybe you had the phone of the place where you was staying. Did any job you applied for sound promising? The guy that spilled your fries sounds neat.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Yes, no. There was no cell phone saying. I gave him the number of the house that I was at.
Yes I did get a job after many applications that I put out. Thank you back thank you again Beth hope you are well!
Comment from Jim Wile
I loved the concluding lines of your initial remarks: "Can I do or change anything in my life? Can I make it better in the future?
I can try...that is all."
I think you've learned that you can't change anything in the past--only your perception of it, but you do have control over your future. I think what you learned about the past is that almost no one can be trusted, which is such an unfortunate way to view life. Hopefully, though, your fan base here has made you question that earlier perception and has let you know there are really people who care about you and want you to have a happy life and not just use you to fulfill their own desires.
I wonder about that collision in the McDonald's--if it was really an accident or a clumsy ploy for him to meet you. Let's hope he turns out to be a decent guy and not just some opportunist who wants to use you like so many others. In your story, is it time to "shake off the disease the manipulators leave and find a new direction?" I'm guessing you're a long way from there yet. - Jim
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I loved the concluding lines of your initial remarks: "Can I do or change anything in my life? Can I make it better in the future?
I can try...that is all."
I think you've learned that you can't change anything in the past--only your perception of it, but you do have control over your future. I think what you learned about the past is that almost no one can be trusted, which is such an unfortunate way to view life. Hopefully, though, your fan base here has made you question that earlier perception and has let you know there are really people who care about you and want you to have a happy life and not just use you to fulfill their own desires.
I wonder about that collision in the McDonald's--if it was really an accident or a clumsy ploy for him to meet you. Let's hope he turns out to be a decent guy and not just some opportunist who wants to use you like so many others. In your story, is it time to "shake off the disease the manipulators leave and find a new direction?" I'm guessing you're a long way from there yet. - Jim
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2023
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Good question Jim! If you're like excuse the expression. I know it's kind of crude but life is kind of like lousy, sex lots of up and down to no real climax. It's crude but accurate terrible. I know. Please excuse me, I thank you so much for your review. I'm always happy to receive them! I'm happy to have to here you here you have the best reviews ever. Thank you so much!