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2023 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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The joy is any given moment is magnified by taking our time to be still and breathe in the beauty that surrounds us. We need to pause like the dragonfly. You do this with your pen and this Haiku is lovely.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Ginda

    Thank you very much. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review (*=*)

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Are they hunting wen they land? Are they resting for the future hunt? This was a perfect moment captured. Like seeing a hummingbird lighting on a surface. Rare and remarkable. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you very much, Gretchen. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review (*=*)

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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A few weeks ago, I read an article on dragonflies and all the good they do for the environment. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation for our reading pleasure.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you, Barbara. Dragonflies are amazing.

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Comment from Lisasview
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Wow what a brilliant read dear Gypsy... The metaphors behind your lines are certainly there...and easy for me to see.
The image and colours are lovely and of course your information is so well received.
Thank you,
Lisa

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from shelley kaye
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wait- the dragonfly is essentially a waterbug?
never knew that... interesting...

great haiku - he seems hungry lol
love the satori enjoying the moment
people should do this instead of rushing everywhere LOL

nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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There are jewelry pins that are created as a dragonfly.

Dragonflies become adults after five years of maturity. The wings are long and highly creative. Popular creatures.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Barry Penfold
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I am fairly new to Haiku and appreciate your notes. I think your Haiku about the Dragonfly is very good. I get the picture through the words and the image is a great one. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from royowen
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Funny thing, I saw a dead dragonfly this morning, that's not a common sight, and here's you writing a really good haiku with a very cool haiku, well done, a terrific post, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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reply by royowen on 28-Nov-2023
    Well done
Comment from Navada
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I like the way your words and the stunning visual image work together to convey a sense of the transitory, as does the opening word "flitting". We get a sense that we're capturing a very brief snapshot of time that encourages us to reflect on our own mortality, much as we reflect on that of the dragonfly. Beautifully written.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


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    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from patcelaw
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Your poetry and the presentations are very good. I learned something new about dragonflies today. Thank you for sharing this with us and I wish you the very best week. Patricia.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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