2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
The joy is any given moment is magnified by taking our time to be still and breathe in the beauty that surrounds us. We need to pause like the dragonfly. You do this with your pen and this Haiku is lovely.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
The joy is any given moment is magnified by taking our time to be still and breathe in the beauty that surrounds us. We need to pause like the dragonfly. You do this with your pen and this Haiku is lovely.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Ginda
Thank you very much. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review (*=*)
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Are they hunting wen they land? Are they resting for the future hunt? This was a perfect moment captured. Like seeing a hummingbird lighting on a surface. Rare and remarkable. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
Are they hunting wen they land? Are they resting for the future hunt? This was a perfect moment captured. Like seeing a hummingbird lighting on a surface. Rare and remarkable. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review (*=*)
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
A few weeks ago, I read an article on dragonflies and all the good they do for the environment. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation for our reading pleasure.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
A few weeks ago, I read an article on dragonflies and all the good they do for the environment. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation for our reading pleasure.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Barbara. Dragonflies are amazing.
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Comment from Lisasview
Wow what a brilliant read dear Gypsy... The metaphors behind your lines are certainly there...and easy for me to see.
The image and colours are lovely and of course your information is so well received.
Thank you,
Lisa
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
Wow what a brilliant read dear Gypsy... The metaphors behind your lines are certainly there...and easy for me to see.
The image and colours are lovely and of course your information is so well received.
Thank you,
Lisa
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
wait- the dragonfly is essentially a waterbug?
never knew that... interesting...
great haiku - he seems hungry lol
love the satori enjoying the moment
people should do this instead of rushing everywhere LOL
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
wait- the dragonfly is essentially a waterbug?
never knew that... interesting...
great haiku - he seems hungry lol
love the satori enjoying the moment
people should do this instead of rushing everywhere LOL
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
There are jewelry pins that are created as a dragonfly.
Dragonflies become adults after five years of maturity. The wings are long and highly creative. Popular creatures.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
There are jewelry pins that are created as a dragonfly.
Dragonflies become adults after five years of maturity. The wings are long and highly creative. Popular creatures.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Barry Penfold
I am fairly new to Haiku and appreciate your notes. I think your Haiku about the Dragonfly is very good. I get the picture through the words and the image is a great one. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
I am fairly new to Haiku and appreciate your notes. I think your Haiku about the Dragonfly is very good. I get the picture through the words and the image is a great one. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from royowen
Funny thing, I saw a dead dragonfly this morning, that's not a common sight, and here's you writing a really good haiku with a very cool haiku, well done, a terrific post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
Funny thing, I saw a dead dragonfly this morning, that's not a common sight, and here's you writing a really good haiku with a very cool haiku, well done, a terrific post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Well done
Comment from Navada
I like the way your words and the stunning visual image work together to convey a sense of the transitory, as does the opening word "flitting". We get a sense that we're capturing a very brief snapshot of time that encourages us to reflect on our own mortality, much as we reflect on that of the dragonfly. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
I like the way your words and the stunning visual image work together to convey a sense of the transitory, as does the opening word "flitting". We get a sense that we're capturing a very brief snapshot of time that encourages us to reflect on our own mortality, much as we reflect on that of the dragonfly. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from patcelaw
Your poetry and the presentations are very good. I learned something new about dragonflies today. Thank you for sharing this with us and I wish you the very best week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
Your poetry and the presentations are very good. I learned something new about dragonflies today. Thank you for sharing this with us and I wish you the very best week. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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