One Man's Calling
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Beth and Ben are a cool couple I think. Not only is our spiritual calling and they love each other. And on a mission permission to bring the word and the mission to solve the little mysteries along the way. Very well written I think it's a fine submission. I don't see any issues with grammar punctuation sentence structure. None of that was all looks really good to me just like it did the last couple times I read. A great submission best of luck to you hope you have an awesome night!
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Beth and Ben are a cool couple I think. Not only is our spiritual calling and they love each other. And on a mission permission to bring the word and the mission to solve the little mysteries along the way. Very well written I think it's a fine submission. I don't see any issues with grammar punctuation sentence structure. None of that was all looks really good to me just like it did the last couple times I read. A great submission best of luck to you hope you have an awesome night!
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate your very nice review.
Comment from Wendy G
Good chapter! And I am glad you included the verse in the notes. Humanly speaking, they will want to settle down sooner or later, but I think for both at present they will choose to wait until they believe it to be God's will, and meantime see what He has planned for them. It's a concern that Larrabee is probably still around, taking random shots at them. Well done.
Wendy
Edit: "fisherman, you know, and dock hands."(fishermen)
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Good chapter! And I am glad you included the verse in the notes. Humanly speaking, they will want to settle down sooner or later, but I think for both at present they will choose to wait until they believe it to be God's will, and meantime see what He has planned for them. It's a concern that Larrabee is probably still around, taking random shots at them. Well done.
Wendy
Edit: "fisherman, you know, and dock hands."(fishermen)
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much! And thank you for the catch.