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Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a sweet birthday poem for Sarah. You included many interesting facts about her life. It's good to learn a bit about her, as I've not yet met her on FS. Good song you included! I'm sure she'll enjoy that. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi Carol. I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by Carol Clark2 on 30-Nov-2023
    A nice poem! Thank you.
Comment from Aussie
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A cleverly written birthday poem for Sarah. Your writings for birthdays give us insight into the folks who are members of Fanstory. We are a huge family and with all those members...you will be in your centenary year by the time you finish @ 100 years old. I'll take over from the heavenly realms! K xx

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    Hahahaha! Fortunately tho, I only write for those who have been so good to review and be there for me in other ways. It is my way of saying thank you. And if someone asks me to do one for someone I don't know, then I most certainly do. I am not singling anyone out, but like you said, I may not be able to get to all of them and there are so many I have not even met yet.

    But so good to hear from you, my sweet K. I always look forward to seeing you. Thanks for always a kind word for my poems, my very dear friend. And I thank you too for the generous gift of six stars too. You are the best, but then I hope you know that. Hugs with a big smile!! Love, Debi
reply by Aussie on 25-Nov-2023
    My little bee in a bottle. You can't sit still and need to spread the Son's shine. I do send cards at Christmas if you send me your email. K XX
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    I love it and I have something pretty cool to send you too, that you can use for others. My email is:
    debipm@icloud.com
Comment from Tina Crute
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What a sweet personal story told in rhyme! I feel like I know Sarah now. I enjoy reading true story poems so I enjoyed this one. You rhymed some tough words here, but did it well, and made it engaging throughout!
Tina

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi Tina, I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another birthday tribute! Happy Birthday Sarah! You've certainly got a great deal of info in there, Debi, and I'm sure Sarah will be very proud. I've just written a verse about James Taylor, brought up in North Carolina and singing its praises. I'm jealous. Thanks for sharing your thoughtful verse, Debi. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    Lol, yes, Debbie, I have a list of everyone I wanted to write for, and that is when I saw that I had missed your birthday, I took it so hard. I didn't know the date of yours until that day when I looked and I panicked, as I didn't want to miss anyone on that list. After I get thru everyone, then I will be done, but for now, I feel that God has asked me to bring some joy into the hearts of others and do it in this way. It is such a reward, but you are right about there being a lot. Anyway, you wouldn't believe how many people here either started in North Carolina or are ending up there. Right now it is the number one state the people here retire to..

    Anyway, thanks you so much for the lovely review and comments, Debbie. I always appreciate you so much and will look for your article on James Taylor. Another one of my favorites. Thanks again, my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Debi, as always you've written a lovely birthday greeting to one of our writers on this site. I'm listi.to he music as I'm writing this. I love it. All best, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi there Ulla, I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Bill Schott
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Another cool birthday greeting, this time for Sarah Robin. To be good at bridge is saying a lot since must people have never heard of the famous game; I she played with Omar Shariff, it must have been for money. Happy Birthday to the Tennessean.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi there Bill, I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to Sarah Robin with us. I don't think, I've ever heard of this sweet lady. I will surely search her out. You are doing us all a great service by sending this birthday wishes.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi again, Barb. Little by little, I think I will catch up with these. Lol. I don't mind them tho, because you know me, I am happiest when mingling with my friends.

    I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you so much for the poem for Sarah! She is really well traveled and I knew about the sports and bridge but didn't realize she was snowbird who flew south for the winter. We are blessed to get to know her here!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    Hi Helen, oh no I didn't mean to make it sound like she is a snowbird. LOL, but that was the last time that Robin flew was south to Texas.
    She actually lives in the same building with Terry. So maybe I should look at a way to rephrase this? I change them so many times before I am completely happy, that shouldn't be a problem.

    Thanks tho Hon, for your sweet comments and keeping me on my toes. One of the things I love most about you. How did your Thanksgiving turn out? It must be awesome having them with you still. Or are you ready for your house back?? Haha! Anyway thanks Sis!!
reply by lyenochka on 25-Nov-2023
    Working on getting the house cleaned up. The oldest was still sniffling and got an earache. The younger two wanted to play Monopoly for days ! We had hubby's sisters over the second day. It was busy!!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Another wonderful birthday poem introducing Sarah. Some may not know her work, but you laid the groundwork with her biography for us to discover a fascinating writer and person.
Best regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi again Mary, I am starting to think that I may get caught up after all. However it isn't so bad, because I get to mingle with my friends. I just had too many in a row, but down to my last post.

    I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
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I'm not sure if I know Sarah. Is she simply known as Sarah or does she use another handle. It seems North Carolina produced a lot of talented people because I see a lot of writer are from there. I guess she went to shool in Knoxville my adopted state. I love your poem and now I going to relax and enjoy Rocky Top.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    Yes, Beth, right before you started reading the poem I wrote this poem is for Sarah Robin. It was a little unusual place for me to do it, but since my first line read, like a little spring-time bird, I thought I would write her name with the poem. lol.. I am not sure how long she has been here but she lives in the same building as Terry B. But not sure how long as I haven't known her that long either.

    Thanks so much for your lovely review and comments, Beth. I appreciate your generous six stars as well, my very lovely friend. Love, Debi