Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Grey"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from Barry Penfold
Wow. A very different approach.There is a lot of emotion and turmoil here but something about it attracts me to want to read more. Your art is very good. You tell a very important story. Do not give up. Take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Wow. A very different approach.There is a lot of emotion and turmoil here but something about it attracts me to want to read more. Your art is very good. You tell a very important story. Do not give up. Take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barry for your kind review! It's part of a three book series of first book is called Ghost. Feel free to read in my portfolio. If you wish note. Some chapters are hard to digest as it details abuse.
Yes, I tell you that if you choose to read you aware of that. Thank you so much for stopping in and waiting. I'm so happy you did. I really appreciate everything you say. I need took the time to do so. Have a great night!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Disappear, and she's won, Lea. Stay strong and fight, and your story gets out there and saves others...but it will also save you. Your mother gets carte blanche to say whatever she wants if you're not around to defend yourself. She'll say you left because you were the one lying and couldn't face the humiliation. She has no scruples. This is my favorite quote. Repeat it as often as you have to:
Courage does not always roar. Sometimes, Courage is the quiet voice, at the end of the day, that says, "I will try again tomorrow."
You can do this, Lea. You were dealt a horrendous blow today...in your most vulnerable spot. But you've had so much worse things, and you've survived them like a champion. Please dig down deep again. Be a bulldozer. xoxoxxo
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Disappear, and she's won, Lea. Stay strong and fight, and your story gets out there and saves others...but it will also save you. Your mother gets carte blanche to say whatever she wants if you're not around to defend yourself. She'll say you left because you were the one lying and couldn't face the humiliation. She has no scruples. This is my favorite quote. Repeat it as often as you have to:
Courage does not always roar. Sometimes, Courage is the quiet voice, at the end of the day, that says, "I will try again tomorrow."
You can do this, Lea. You were dealt a horrendous blow today...in your most vulnerable spot. But you've had so much worse things, and you've survived them like a champion. Please dig down deep again. Be a bulldozer. xoxoxxo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Don't worry, my friend, the bulldozers always been there. I don't know me. I have to go through the grief process a little bit and then my logical mind kickson and I get pissed off and things start to roll. I know after contemplating it for a while. My mother is very, very afraid. I guess she's gonna do whatever she can to discredit me. She phoned her today too trying to get my Uncle to have me removed from this place thing. I'm daof course he doesn't believe it he's one of the smarter ones. Terrible this woman sometimes I just want to retaliate. I'm doing it the better way though. I retaliate with words. People got me down but I always get app and fight back every time and this will be no different realization that she's just freaked out and I want to do whatever she can to not make this happen. Can I only make me chucause I know it's really going on and so do you my friend. As always, thank you for your support for your review. Everything that you do it's a precious gift to me thank you again!
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My pleasure. You're not alone in this, Lea. xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a pity you are still haunted by your Mother and her actions still affect you Lea. We cannot choose our parents and we expect them to be perfect, but they are just human. One day I will write the story of mine, but I have buried it all in the past and I never want to revisit those days again. My parents are long gone now and I shall let sleeping dogs lie. Perhaps your son should have some trust in you and the relationship you share Lea? Your story continues with your education of how some men treat women and of course this kind of behaviour still exists. Men want women for sex and they don't care how they get it and women suffer or they become hardened to the reality of it.
Another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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It is a pity you are still haunted by your Mother and her actions still affect you Lea. We cannot choose our parents and we expect them to be perfect, but they are just human. One day I will write the story of mine, but I have buried it all in the past and I never want to revisit those days again. My parents are long gone now and I shall let sleeping dogs lie. Perhaps your son should have some trust in you and the relationship you share Lea? Your story continues with your education of how some men treat women and of course this kind of behaviour still exists. Men want women for sex and they don't care how they get it and women suffer or they become hardened to the reality of it.
Another fine chapter Lea, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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You are incredibly right again Dolly! I believe my son is Acting out of a Justin case kind of scenarsort of like a precaution. I guess just in case my grandmother was right. Whom he loves very much. And I get rid of that talk about his fine parents at all. I shall leave him to it for now and discuss it. They are he knows how to find me. Alright I will check on him regardless. All the truth will come out soon and we're certain. Family members are getting scared. And that's why my mother is saying just to have and tell him to destroy my reputation and try to assassinate my character. After initial hurt, my logical mind always Kix. I generally give it the time to do so. Thank you again my friend for your wonderful review and your fine rating. I appreciate your comments. Because they are very supportive and helpful to me and keeps my backbone. Stiff thank you for that so much I hope you have the best day!
Comment from Teri7
Lea, I am so sorry you had to go through this. You used very good descriptive words and the art work you did went very well with your words. See you are special. You can write and also do your own artwork. You are in my prayers sweet friend! Teri
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Lea, I am so sorry you had to go through this. You used very good descriptive words and the art work you did went very well with your words. See you are special. You can write and also do your own artwork. You are in my prayers sweet friend! Teri
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you my friend you're very kind Teri! I appreciate your well wishes and support! I thank you so much for this your review and fine rating! Hope you have a great day!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You have to stay strong, Lea! You've made such progress and it's important to stay on track and not run away, no matter how tempting. You need to see your younger self through this period. Without you, she's going to be lost. How I wanted to line up behind you to hit that SOB K! I know you've learned from the last time but what trouble is your friend now drawing you into? She's such a bad influence even though I appreciate you need money to survive. Once again, the choice seems to be taken away from you. No errors noted in the body of the post. Take care Debbie x
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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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You have to stay strong, Lea! You've made such progress and it's important to stay on track and not run away, no matter how tempting. You need to see your younger self through this period. Without you, she's going to be lost. How I wanted to line up behind you to hit that SOB K! I know you've learned from the last time but what trouble is your friend now drawing you into? She's such a bad influence even though I appreciate you need money to survive. Once again, the choice seems to be taken away from you. No errors noted in the body of the post. Take care Debbie x
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Debbie a** will be kicked and will be continued to be kicked. All I gotta do is publish this book and sit back. Watch the karma movie play and eat popcorn while it does. Thank you so much for your support and your kind words and believe me. My rage kicks in once again and things happen. Thank you for your kindness above all. I appreciate this and all you say have a marvelous day!