Spectre
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Void"This is book two of a trilogy book 1 "Ghost"
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Comment from JSD
Yes there are errors but we can overlook them as you pour out your troubles, your memories and your feelings. Let this writing be as cleansing as that hot bath. Tears form for you. Xxx
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Yes there are errors but we can overlook them as you pour out your troubles, your memories and your feelings. Let this writing be as cleansing as that hot bath. Tears form for you. Xxx
Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you John has always you're so kind and understanding! I know that some of this is tough to read. So I'm so happy to see you. Hanging in there with me is so supportive and kind thank you again!
Comment from Chuck Keller
WOW Kiddo
It's intense and painful to read
I can relate to the "out of body" experience
Sometimes in order to survive we must exit reality
I likened it to hovering over myself in Vietnam
Watching myself work but allowing the spirit to be somehow separated from the horror
I'm still here.
So sorry for your experience but hopeful that in the end telling the story will be freeing and helpful
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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WOW Kiddo
It's intense and painful to read
I can relate to the "out of body" experience
Sometimes in order to survive we must exit reality
I likened it to hovering over myself in Vietnam
Watching myself work but allowing the spirit to be somehow separated from the horror
I'm still here.
So sorry for your experience but hopeful that in the end telling the story will be freeing and helpful
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Hi Chuck! I'm sorry you had to go through Is such an ordeal as going to war. I've read about Vietnam, not good. Although it's the not same kind of war. I thank you very much as always for your kind words and your comments of support. That mean so much to me thank you have a great day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a painful post to read Lea as the realisation of being brutally violated is dreadful. The feeling of despair and hopelessness here is terrifying Lea. You are just a girl fighting in the arena with grown men and being beaten time and time again. These men should both be punished for what they did to you Lea. It makes me angry that you had no one to stick up for you and fight for you. Another fine chapter in your very sad story Lea, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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This is a painful post to read Lea as the realisation of being brutally violated is dreadful. The feeling of despair and hopelessness here is terrifying Lea. You are just a girl fighting in the arena with grown men and being beaten time and time again. These men should both be punished for what they did to you Lea. It makes me angry that you had no one to stick up for you and fight for you. Another fine chapter in your very sad story Lea, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
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Thank you again such an awesome and insightful review! Don't let to do appreciate you reading alone I know what's not easy sometimes. Oh my gratefully appreciate this thank you!