Comment from AP Apgar

Exceptional

What an amazing account! Excellent picture presentation connecting-
Poem flows nicely- and kept me reading to the happy ending, where she not only survived- but touched the hearts of those around her so profoundly- excellent write - thank you for sharing! - Bless You- AP

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for your positive feedback! :)

Comment from Daylily

Excellent

Your entry is so deserving of being the story poem contest winner. It is very uplifting as it tells of courage and determination, empathy, and kindness. I enjoyed reading it very much.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Daylily! xx

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Wow, good for her...what a wonderful story which gave me goosebumps...
Isn't it wonderful that you can tell this true story in a poetic form...
I really loved it...and I am so glad to know that this gal had such a great attitude.
Lisasview

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you so much. She is pretty amazing.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this story/poem. The world needs to hear of these miracles of love, courage, and resilience. Love always wins. Happy Thanksgiving.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you very much! :)

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao !

You now have 14 votes.

A life story that inspires.

It 's a miracle she survived the accident but what got her back on her feet and back to school was her fighting spirit.

The students in her class did the rest , being there for her .

I was quite surprised as I don't really have a good impression of the younger generations.

Brilliantly told!

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, tempeste - I really appreciate this feedback! :)

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Wow. A lovely story of utmost determination and bravery. I also love the description of the younger students being respectful and supportive of one of theirs despite the age difference. Well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Barry!

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

What a great story poem well written and expressive in content and presentation
What a great girl I hope the went on to bigger and brighter things
A lovely read and good luck
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a really inspiring story which you incorporated so well in your fine verse. No wonder she was so greatly admired given all that courage and determination. It all goes to prove that, where there's a will, there's a way. Excellent entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Debbie! xx

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A wonderful, vivid, and very moving story of courage and perseverance as well as of acceptance and support. You told the story so well in your poem! Sending you very best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Wendy - I really appreciate this feedback! xx

Comment from Tina Crute

Exceptional

I got chills, reading this. So many emotions were stirred. You have a way of grabbing the reader's attention and drawing them into the story, so much so, that they(I) could not stop reading if I tried. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Tina - I really, really appreciate your feedback and the generous six stars!

reply by Tina Crute on 21-Nov-2023

You deserved them!