One Man's Calling
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Those two guys teaming up could be a real problem for Ben, or at least anyone that gets too close then the two of them attack Ben. Unless, of course, God has a different plan. One word needs fixing: . . . feeding the kid, (Seth) thought.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Those two guys teaming up could be a real problem for Ben, or at least anyone that gets too close then the two of them attack Ben. Unless, of course, God has a different plan. One word needs fixing: . . . feeding the kid, (Seth) thought.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you. And thank you for the catch.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's Seth likes to kick ass! The quite like the cowboy style Western style background. Do you have for the story anything older than what I can remember? Especially the really ancient stuff. What's going on in this chapter with him chasing down the stage coach running across some people. I think you've got a lot of action and here you've got some believable characters you've created a really neat imagery when I read it. It's a great entry. I see no issues with grammar punctuation sentence structure or subject matter Great submission I hope you have a good night!
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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That's Seth likes to kick ass! The quite like the cowboy style Western style background. Do you have for the story anything older than what I can remember? Especially the really ancient stuff. What's going on in this chapter with him chasing down the stage coach running across some people. I think you've got a lot of action and here you've got some believable characters you've created a really neat imagery when I read it. It's a great entry. I see no issues with grammar punctuation sentence structure or subject matter Great submission I hope you have a good night!
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
I'm not sure what you mean by 'anything older than you remember'.
The early chapters deal with Ben beginning his mission in Colorado. The stagecoach scene sets up a relationship with a man who appears a few times many chapters on.