Guided by Faith
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Chapter 25 A"Can faith guide our path?
39 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is good, very good. Emma has hit the wall with things going wrong, but she is showing wonderful resilience. I wasn't sure she had it in her. As far as children of addicts, a couple of mine had problems in school but are both very successful in their lives in every way.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
  |
This is good, very good. Emma has hit the wall with things going wrong, but she is showing wonderful resilience. I wasn't sure she had it in her. As far as children of addicts, a couple of mine had problems in school but are both very successful in their lives in every way.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
-
Those children can be successful. I added that because a reviewer told that wasn't possible. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
A great chapter .Peggy is a.nuisance and shameless. Hope that is the end of her interference. EMMA has to be strong .when one is surrounded by love one can overcome any issues..
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
 |
A great chapter .Peggy is a.nuisance and shameless. Hope that is the end of her interference. EMMA has to be strong .when one is surrounded by love one can overcome any issues..
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
-
Peggy will raise her ugliness one more time. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I've just read both chapters, and they were great! You've opened many eyes, I should think, about pregnant women and drugs. I've heard of some babies having withdrawal symptoms after birth. At least Emma is fine. I hope she starts believing Seth about how he hates Peggy coming on to him. She's cooked her goose now, though! Well done. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
I've just read both chapters, and they were great! You've opened many eyes, I should think, about pregnant women and drugs. I've heard of some babies having withdrawal symptoms after birth. At least Emma is fine. I hope she starts believing Seth about how he hates Peggy coming on to him. She's cooked her goose now, though! Well done. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the encouragement. Yes, there are still things to come in next week's post.
Comment from estory
This was a good post, lots of things happening here, but you juggled it well. Seth seems to have picked up the pieces with Emma, he makes a strong shove against Barton, getting her arrested, and obviously seems to be making a strong play for Emma. We also get all these details about the difficult childhood she had, the hard facts of her mother's life, and a clue as to her strong need to fend for herself. There's lots of emotion surging under the dialogue, I thought it was crisp and tense at times, there was a great suspenseful moment when she has a hard time opening the door and we get all her fears after dealing with the guy who attacked her. A complicated chapter, but a good one. estory
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
This was a good post, lots of things happening here, but you juggled it well. Seth seems to have picked up the pieces with Emma, he makes a strong shove against Barton, getting her arrested, and obviously seems to be making a strong play for Emma. We also get all these details about the difficult childhood she had, the hard facts of her mother's life, and a clue as to her strong need to fend for herself. There's lots of emotion surging under the dialogue, I thought it was crisp and tense at times, there was a great suspenseful moment when she has a hard time opening the door and we get all her fears after dealing with the guy who attacked her. A complicated chapter, but a good one. estory
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Paster Pat and Seth are very protective of Emma. I never had that. She is lucky so many people love her.
Peggy is such a hateful woman. I'm happy Seth finally put her in her place.
Seth and Emma are getting very close and intimate. I can't wait for their first kiss. LoL
I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
Paster Pat and Seth are very protective of Emma. I never had that. She is lucky so many people love her.
Peggy is such a hateful woman. I'm happy Seth finally put her in her place.
Seth and Emma are getting very close and intimate. I can't wait for their first kiss. LoL
I appreciate your writing talent. Well done!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
This was a top-line chapter. So inclusive and informative. Thanks a lot. Now some things to look at. a baby born to a crack[ed](-) addicted mother
difficulty paying attention,[did you want a line jump, here]
trouble with self-regulation
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
This was a top-line chapter. So inclusive and informative. Thanks a lot. Now some things to look at. a baby born to a crack[ed](-) addicted mother
difficulty paying attention,[did you want a line jump, here]
trouble with self-regulation
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sadly, there are so many of these young mothers on the streets struggling to survive and take care of babies. Their options slim, as are the babies current and future prospects. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
Sadly, there are so many of these young mothers on the streets struggling to survive and take care of babies. Their options slim, as are the babies current and future prospects. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
How was Peggy cuffed with a casserole and suitcase in her hands? You may want to address that.
A very good chapter, Barbara. I just love the way your dialogue moves through the story. There could be more sensory detail, but I do really enjoy the dialogue. I'm glad that Emma and Seth are talking and setting the record straight on things.
See you next week. Have a lovely holiday.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
How was Peggy cuffed with a casserole and suitcase in her hands? You may want to address that.
A very good chapter, Barbara. I just love the way your dialogue moves through the story. There could be more sensory detail, but I do really enjoy the dialogue. I'm glad that Emma and Seth are talking and setting the record straight on things.
See you next week. Have a lovely holiday.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
I never thought of that. I will address it. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Beth, this was an excellent chapter which explained a lot and made the actions and reactions of the characters quite reasonable. Peggy B will of course be furious but man, she has cheek! Offering to share.... And then calling Emma a slut! And she has obviously broken the law herself searching through his desk. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
Beth, this was an excellent chapter which explained a lot and made the actions and reactions of the characters quite reasonable. Peggy B will of course be furious but man, she has cheek! Offering to share.... And then calling Emma a slut! And she has obviously broken the law herself searching through his desk. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter. It was interesting from beginning to end. Thanks for letting me know it was not a full chapter. When you do that the end of the first part is a little flat.I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
|
This is an excellent chapter. It was interesting from beginning to end. Thanks for letting me know it was not a full chapter. When you do that the end of the first part is a little flat.I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
-
Thank you for the kind review.
