Glamour Queen
For my mother-in-law33 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely poem for your mother-in-law , Tina. She sounds like a very strong lady who has much love to share and she gets it back. I love that glamour and generosity is part of the mum that you love. Beautiiully written.
cheers.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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This is a lovely poem for your mother-in-law , Tina. She sounds like a very strong lady who has much love to share and she gets it back. I love that glamour and generosity is part of the mum that you love. Beautiiully written.
cheers.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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You summed her up well. Thank you for reading my poem:) I appreciate your thoughts!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very nice tribute to your mother-in-law
with effective imagery and rhyme that
highlight some of her special qualities.
-She sounds like someone you would like to meet,
going strong at ninety years old.
-I like your conclusion and that is a
very nice tribute to her, as well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Tina.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A very nice tribute to your mother-in-law
with effective imagery and rhyme that
highlight some of her special qualities.
-She sounds like someone you would like to meet,
going strong at ninety years old.
-I like your conclusion and that is a
very nice tribute to her, as well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Thank you comma pam for your lovely review, as always. I haven't had time to read any of your work yet but after the holiday comma I really cannot wait to dive in! Thank you for your encouragement.
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You are welcome, Tina.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
How very blessed you are to have a mother-in-law who brings so much joy and meaning into your life and that of your family. She has inspired a lovely verse which was a pleasure to read. Love always wins. Happy Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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How very blessed you are to have a mother-in-law who brings so much joy and meaning into your life and that of your family. She has inspired a lovely verse which was a pleasure to read. Love always wins. Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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She really is joyful, inspiring and lovely! You hit the nail(s) on the head(s)!
Comment from Lisasview
How wonderful it is that you call your husbands mother, Mom... I always called my husbands father, Dad... just felt right.
The fact that although she has some heath issue that her spirit is always high is wonderful.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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How wonderful it is that you call your husbands mother, Mom... I always called my husbands father, Dad... just felt right.
The fact that although she has some heath issue that her spirit is always high is wonderful.
Lisasview
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Lisa, I'm so glad that you also experienced a close relationship with an in law. It really is special when you decide to love one who is not your blood but is family, all the same!
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Lisa, I'm so glad that you also experienced a close relationship with an in law. It really is special when you decide to love one who is not your blood but is family, all the same!
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That is for sure!!
Tina, are we friends... We should be so we can more easily read each others posts... and did you have time to read Nymph?
Lisa
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I looked for it and couldn't find it. Is it way down on your page?
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Yes, I won the contest ...and it was a while back I do not have a ton posted so you should be able to locate it quickly...Lisa
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It is right below the story of my family Romantics at Heart,,,
So a bit of a ways down...
Lisa
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Ok I will find it!
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Okay, that would be great!
Lisasview
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Such a wonderful and beautiful poem to your mom. How nice that is I envy people who have such relationships with their parents. I think so wonderful thing and you did a great job on this poem! I see no issues with grammar aesthetics punctuation sentence structure All comes together in lovely piece of magic. A fine submission I wish you best a luck I hope your day It's great!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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Such a wonderful and beautiful poem to your mom. How nice that is I envy people who have such relationships with their parents. I think so wonderful thing and you did a great job on this poem! I see no issues with grammar aesthetics punctuation sentence structure All comes together in lovely piece of magic. A fine submission I wish you best a luck I hope your day It's great!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2023
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It wasn't always so easy. We are very different but we both intend on appreciating our differences, so it's a beautiful thing! Magical, you might say,lol.
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It wasn't always so easy. We are very different but we both intend on appreciating our differences, so it's a beautiful thing! Magical, you might say,lol.
Comment from lancellot
This is a very nice tribute. You are a very lucky woman to have such a person in your life. Marriage with a bonus.
suggestion only:
The only problem that endures is the number of retorts.
-how about-
The only problem that endures is the number who adore
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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This is a very nice tribute. You are a very lucky woman to have such a person in your life. Marriage with a bonus.
suggestion only:
The only problem that endures is the number of retorts.
-how about-
The only problem that endures is the number who adore
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Thank you for this review! Hmmm...maybe so, as far as the change you suggested!
I am blessed, for sure.
Tina
Comment from Thesis
What a great tribute to your mother-in-law. You clearly state that she is an extraordinary woman who is selfless and caring, in spite of having health issues of her own, and does it all while looking smashing. You're lucky to have her in your life.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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What a great tribute to your mother-in-law. You clearly state that she is an extraordinary woman who is selfless and caring, in spite of having health issues of her own, and does it all while looking smashing. You're lucky to have her in your life.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thesis...I love the word, "smashing." I wish I had used it! That's how she always looks:) Thank you for the review !
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Glamour Queen, presented with five rhyming tercets, honors a person who has weathered many years and still looks no less for wear. Sounds like a beautiful person inside and out.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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This poem, Glamour Queen, presented with five rhyming tercets, honors a person who has weathered many years and still looks no less for wear. Sounds like a beautiful person inside and out.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023
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Thanks, Bill. It was a fun write and an easy one as the subject is very inspiring:) I so appreciate your review.
Tina
Comment from poetwatch
You are lucky to have a wonderful mother-in-law, Tina. I also have one and she is 98. She was doing great until this year when she had a stroke. Noe, she is forgetful and my wife is taking care of her. Thank you for sharing your "mom". :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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You are lucky to have a wonderful mother-in-law, Tina. I also have one and she is 98. She was doing great until this year when she had a stroke. Noe, she is forgetful and my wife is taking care of her. Thank you for sharing your "mom". :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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You should write a poem about your MIL. I am very interested to know what she is like. I will pray, as soon as I finish this note, for her. I hope she bounces back a bit from the stroke and that your wife is able to take care of her well. Thanks for the note and review!
Comment from Wendy G
What a delightful lady she sounds - string and beautiful with great ferocity of spirit. You are fortunate to have her as a mother-in-law. My only suggestion is to have a paler background and a larger font as if is a bit hard to read.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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What a delightful lady she sounds - string and beautiful with great ferocity of spirit. You are fortunate to have her as a mother-in-law. My only suggestion is to have a paler background and a larger font as if is a bit hard to read.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023
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I agree with your corrections and will address them tonight. I did go a little overboard on the color, a color she often wears!
Thanks, Wendy!
