Ice Queen
Some people collect hearts.13 total reviews
Comment from RFL
Loved the introduction of the three characters; a unique approach to this type of poetry. This is a simple, yet complete poem, and it stirred something in me. Keep thinking, keep writing, keep feeling. . . .
RFL
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Loved the introduction of the three characters; a unique approach to this type of poetry. This is a simple, yet complete poem, and it stirred something in me. Keep thinking, keep writing, keep feeling. . . .
RFL
Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thank you, RFL! I think no it will do well.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this is a girl I would rather not meet as she loves breaking hearts here. I wish you luck with the contest, I have met a few cold hearted men too, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Oh dear, this is a girl I would rather not meet as she loves breaking hearts here. I wish you luck with the contest, I have met a few cold hearted men too, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Yes! There are men who do the same, Dolly!
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I voted for you x x x
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Thank you, Miss Dolly!
Comment from Janis M.
The ice queen is a good image to represent this narrative. Your presentation is unique and I think it deserves points for some originality. It's not my particular flavor, but that's just a baseless opinion.
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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The ice queen is a good image to represent this narrative. Your presentation is unique and I think it deserves points for some originality. It's not my particular flavor, but that's just a baseless opinion.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023
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Thank you! I actually had a particular man-eater in mind when I wrote this, but there are plenty of men who are equally cold hearted. Thanks for the review!