Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

This keeps getting stronger and better the further you go along. You really should submit this to a Christian publishing house. They are starved for really good fiction writers. Karen

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thank you immensely!
I have just recently. They only had it a couple weeks before requesting the entire manuscript! I'm excited! (You can tell by all the exclamation points!)

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 17-Nov-2023

See, I am old, I know things.
:-)

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Lovely. One step at a time. He's never unrealistic. I love the way you convey this faith in God driving everything he does, and now Beth is learning it too. An inspiring piece. x

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thank you. I appreciated your support.