Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

a powerful and moving poem about dealing with the lost of a brother and of friends. unfortunately as one gets older one hears of the passing of this person or that person, particularly in this hyper-connected world we live in.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much Jake for your wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That is a beautiful and heartfelt poem for Sandra and she will be comforted by your words, which are realistic, true and wise. Thanks for sharing it. Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much Wendy for your wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem you have written for Sandra. I know she is thrilled that so many of this site love her and want to see her pain go away. With all that was wrong with him physically, she was fortunate that God allowed him so much time with his sister. He didn't complain and was a upbeat and cheerful person.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much Beth, for your wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine poem of condolences for Sandra, lovely rhymes and warm words to soothe Sandra during her grief, much enjoyed Roy, a fine post, love Dolly x x x x x

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks Dolly for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this beautiful, uplifting poem. Our faith and prayers, the Holy Spirit within us, are the precious possessions we give to the others in their losses. Thank you for this lovely addition to Sandra's keepsake book and reminder to us all.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks Sally, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Beautiful rhyming poem for Ian and Sandra. It's a wonderful thing to read all the poems for them. It shows how much the fanstory community care about our own.

Beautiful presentation , the rhyme and meter are perfect, as always.

Well done. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks Gypsy, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Navada

Excellent

What a beautiful response to that beautiful verse from the Psalms. Your compassion and fellow-feeling for Sandra in her time of grief rings clearly here and speaks to others in the community who have suffered similar losses. I'm sure she and they will really appreciate this.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Heather Knight

Exceptional

You write so beautifully, Roy. It's a pity you had to pen this marvellous poem though.
Losing a sibling is always tough, as we both know.
Thanks so much for adding a chapter to Sandra's book.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks Heather, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Roy,
so beautiful my friend.

So much loving wisdom, such comforting language within a the flow of rhyme that slips like silk off the tongue with the message it delivers.

Very beautiful Indeed Roy!

With our thoughts we create...
words of comfort.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks James, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Sure she will certainly appreciate this tribute and these remarks.

Loss is never an easy pill to swallow.

However, as you said, grief lasts a season, then time to move on with living as the one past would want a person to do.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2023

Thanks Brett, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy