The Hungry Mouse
A sneaky intruder gets the cheese.15 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
a really fun verse you penned
the cartoon image is a perfect match for your contest entry
nice rhyming images!
one can easily imagine your mouse's satisfactory and cheesy grin
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a really fun verse you penned
the cartoon image is a perfect match for your contest entry
nice rhyming images!
one can easily imagine your mouse's satisfactory and cheesy grin
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that is creative, and will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
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This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that is creative, and will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from JSD
Even in such a short poem I admire your ability to include some puns and even internal rhyme. squeak and cheek is great and the big cheesy grin wraps it up beautifully. Well done and good luck.
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Even in such a short poem I admire your ability to include some puns and even internal rhyme. squeak and cheek is great and the big cheesy grin wraps it up beautifully. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from Sally Law
This is adorable and fun in rhyming couplets, mystery poet. A delightful read and contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
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This is adorable and fun in rhyming couplets, mystery poet. A delightful read and contest entry.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
Comment from zanni
You chose a fab image to go with your poem which was fun to read. The rhythm of this piece matched the movements of the mouse nicely. It had shades of a limerick with this use of rhyme
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You chose a fab image to go with your poem which was fun to read. The rhythm of this piece matched the movements of the mouse nicely. It had shades of a limerick with this use of rhyme
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2023