Comment from Alaskastory

Excellent

"A Voice From the Wilderness" gives quite a twist to lady golfers who work hard in an LPGA events. Telling about her effort and showing such an amusing photo gives this a big smile.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks Marie! Couldn't resist this entry.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

lol This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers enjoy, as I did.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Your witty punch line says it all. When I fill out medical forms, the questionnaire askes for my "legal gender," or "birth gender." Entering professional sports competitions should require the same. If the gender is incorrect, the contestant should be OUT. Thanks for this innovative and bold piece. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much. Humbly grateful.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for having the nerve to say what we've all been thinking and doing it as a contest entry. Wonderful!! I happen to believe God doesn't make mistakes and if you were born a man, then you're a man. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much Barb. Appreciate your voice, my sister in Christ.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Amen, my brother. My family discussed this around the table all the time. How sick and sad our world has become. I enjoyed your flash and hope it wins. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
100% Girl

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2023

Thanks so much! Appreciate you my sister in Christ.

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

I couldn't agree with you more on that point! Excellent flash story with a good quip at the end.

Next they will probably claim they are handicapped by being trapped in the wrong body type so they should be allowed to enter the paralympics. It never ends with the woke mob.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thanks!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It certainly does. There has to be a lot of questions surrounding the male coming out of the closet and declaring themselves as a woman, no wonder females as questions, beautifully written Stan, bblessngs Roy

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thanks Roy!

reply by royowen on 19-Nov-2023

Welcome

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I would say this little flash fiction is one that is more like a perfect squelch to somebody that is showing off. I enjoyed it very much. Got a big chuckle out of it, and I wish you the best in the contest. Patricia.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thanks!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I agree that it is just not fair to have men who identify as women compete against women. Thanks for creating this story even with the humorous line: "It takes balls to come out here and beat us."
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thanks!

reply by lyenochka on 20-Nov-2023

Congratulations on your win!!

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2023

Thanks!

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Stan, LMBO...I laugh about your poem...
but it's not funny how they have wrecked
women's sports...so many women have
dropped out...and I don't blame them...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and love
your picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2023

Thanks Linda!

reply by l.raven on 23-Nov-2023

your so welcome Stan...love xxoo