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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "A Time to Rest and Reveal"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Thank you for continuing this story in such a timely manner. I have been eagerly looking forward to this chapter. The story keeps getting better as it goes on. The cat adds a lot to the story for me. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you for continuing this story in such a timely manner. I have been eagerly looking forward to this chapter. The story keeps getting better as it goes on. The cat adds a lot to the story for me. Nice writing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you for reading, and for reading for all the months and years. Your support is and has always been, valuable.
The cat will show up again, later, and with a bigger role.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment from forestport12
"Can you explain to me why he doesn't look quite human?" "Not now, we don't have time for that." Yea wow, that's why I need to buy into the world you created, but you have a following and those that love this. I'd be freaking out if someone didn't look quite human. I love the way you write though and the word play you use. Your writing is exceptional.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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"Can you explain to me why he doesn't look quite human?" "Not now, we don't have time for that." Yea wow, that's why I need to buy into the world you created, but you have a following and those that love this. I'd be freaking out if someone didn't look quite human. I love the way you write though and the word play you use. Your writing is exceptional.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Stan, thank you so much for the brilliant review and six stars.
I appreciate you following the craziness of fantasy.
You?ve made a valid point about the not so human brother. I should have played up her concern about that fact. I will go back and tweak it a bit. I know that wasn?t your intention, but sometimes we in the fantasy world forget to add in that element. It?s good to get a fresh perspective.
Thank you for all your comments. That is so very helpful,
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Sally Law
Rhonda dear,
This chapter was deep and revelatory. We finally get a deep look into Theo and his orgins and his affection for Echo Jones. Their bond will never be broken, I think. Theo and Georgio are half brothers, and we get more on Georgio and his orgins too. I think we'll see much more more of Georgio in the coming chapters.
Marvelous writing once again as this story continues to evolve and plot thickens. Staying glued. ;))
Sending you my best today as always, my friend.
Lots of love too.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Rhonda dear,
This chapter was deep and revelatory. We finally get a deep look into Theo and his orgins and his affection for Echo Jones. Their bond will never be broken, I think. Theo and Georgio are half brothers, and we get more on Georgio and his orgins too. I think we'll see much more more of Georgio in the coming chapters.
Marvelous writing once again as this story continues to evolve and plot thickens. Staying glued. ;))
Sending you my best today as always, my friend.
Lots of love too.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Hi Sally, thank you for the beautiful shining stars, my sweet friend!
Theo and Echo have forged an important bond, one that will be tested very soon.
Georgios will pop back up again soon, and will play an important role, for sure. He loves her almost as much as Theo, just in a different way.
Thank you, again, lovely lady.
Much love,
Rhonda
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Rhonda, I just love this story and this chapter. it I so very well written. Theo and Echo get on just find and he allows her questions up to a point. But she really managed to get some very interesting answers. I simply can't wait to knowing more. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Hi, Rhonda, I just love this story and this chapter. it I so very well written. Theo and Echo get on just find and he allows her questions up to a point. But she really managed to get some very interesting answers. I simply can't wait to knowing more. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Hi Ulla! Thanks so much for the six stars, and the supportive review, my friend. You?re right, Theo was careful what he revealed, but Echo was determined to get something, lol.
Have a great week,
Rhonda
Rhonda
Comment from BethShelby
This is is so interesting. I would think a guardian would be like an angelic being and spectors would be simular to demons or evil angels. I like the way your are makiing this not too far out in fantacy fiction. I believe there are immortal beings of another realm that can appear in our realm and look like humans and can interact with them at times.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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This is is so interesting. I would think a guardian would be like an angelic being and spectors would be simular to demons or evil angels. I like the way your are makiing this not too far out in fantacy fiction. I believe there are immortal beings of another realm that can appear in our realm and look like humans and can interact with them at times.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Your review came through twice. Thank you again,
Rhonda
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One of thos review was from me and the other was from my faulty router which I learned often sends out another one. I'm trying or figure out what to do about it, but most people seem to like getting two since they both count.
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Oh, didn't know they both count! Cool!! You're now everyone's favorite reviewer, lol!
Comment from BethShelby
This is is so interesting. I would think a guardian would be like an angelic being and spectors would be simular to demons or evil angels. I like the way your are makiing this not too far out in fantacy fiction. I believe there are immortal beings of another realm that can appear in our realm and look like humans and can interact with them at times.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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This is is so interesting. I would think a guardian would be like an angelic being and spectors would be simular to demons or evil angels. I like the way your are makiing this not too far out in fantacy fiction. I believe there are immortal beings of another realm that can appear in our realm and look like humans and can interact with them at times.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Hi Beth, thank you for the review, my friend! You nailed the angel, demon representation by the characters.
I always try to keep my fantasy characters as close to hi man as I can get them. I want people to relate to them.
Have a great week,
Rhonda
Comment from royowen
I like the way you draw back the theological side of life, and blend it with the mystical, our theology is more simplistic than that, but I think I like yours, unanswered questions will probably dissolve anyway, there are questions in life we. Can't possibly answer. Beautifully written Rhonda, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I like the way you draw back the theological side of life, and blend it with the mystical, our theology is more simplistic than that, but I think I like yours, unanswered questions will probably dissolve anyway, there are questions in life we. Can't possibly answer. Beautifully written Rhonda, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Hi Roy! Thank you for the six stars. It really means a lot, my friend!
I did get a little theological this chapter. I don?t do it often, and Tolkien was much more subtle with it, but it needed brought out, in my opinion.
Thanks so much for the review and analysis.
Take care,
Rhonda
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I liked it anyway Rhonda, it?s subtle to those who don?t know.
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Great!! My job here is done, lol.
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Bless you
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Thank you!
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Bless you,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is soooo good. I really enjoyed reading this chapter and finding out more about Theo. He's a true hero in every since of the word. You're doing a great job of writing this, and I am looking forward to reading more.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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This is soooo good. I really enjoyed reading this chapter and finding out more about Theo. He's a true hero in every since of the word. You're doing a great job of writing this, and I am looking forward to reading more.
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Barbara, for your review of this long chapter. It just kept growing, lol. I appreciate your comments and your keeping up with it.
Take care,
Rhonda