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Comment from Chuck Keller
Such courage is finally growing. I guess it gets to the point that where you've suffered enough and the pot of anger spills over blowing the top off the bubbling brew.
This is still a tragic tale but hard to resist going all the way.
Thank you for sharing it with us
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Such courage is finally growing. I guess it gets to the point that where you've suffered enough and the pot of anger spills over blowing the top off the bubbling brew.
This is still a tragic tale but hard to resist going all the way.
Thank you for sharing it with us
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you, my friend yes, is a young girl. I don't know if I felt strong or courageous but I certainly felt desperation and panic. Yes and pain lots of that. Thank you again you are amazing!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is more xcellent writing. I haven't been able to catch up and I need to make a schedule and start from the beginning. I've had PTSD from two serious incidents so I don't think I can read too much at once. I also have MS and emotional stress effects me badly. I'm an empathetic so I feel the pain of others. I feel so upset to hear of a grown man saying such things. I picked up on some words you said back and my teacher radar went up. I can understand this is difficult to write. But in writing this, you have the power. If you have harsh feelings toward your mother I'm sure there is guilt too. I have a lot of experience with all kids of family dysfunctional dynamics mostly from helping my students over decades. Your will value your honest and expressing. You're doing great work.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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This is more xcellent writing. I haven't been able to catch up and I need to make a schedule and start from the beginning. I've had PTSD from two serious incidents so I don't think I can read too much at once. I also have MS and emotional stress effects me badly. I'm an empathetic so I feel the pain of others. I feel so upset to hear of a grown man saying such things. I picked up on some words you said back and my teacher radar went up. I can understand this is difficult to write. But in writing this, you have the power. If you have harsh feelings toward your mother I'm sure there is guilt too. I have a lot of experience with all kids of family dysfunctional dynamics mostly from helping my students over decades. Your will value your honest and expressing. You're doing great work.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you Alex you understand me in a very unique way. I did not escape unscathed. I suffer from severe depression. And I'm always on guard but i'managed with some good. Anti depression that helps me live a normal life without them. I don't know it was tough. I'm sure you understand. And she tells me of it. And I can't imagine anyone having to deal with that. I hope that you are well and doing OK and once again I thank you. My friend for reading along for understanding and you are unique perspective. Hope you have a great day!
Comment from JT traveller
My heart bleeds for you. I was treated in a very similar fashion by my own mother. She resents everything about me. I totally relate. Sometimes your stories are hard to read as the words cut to my core. I too, was vulnerable as a child, I never felt safe nor protected. Thank you for speaking out. I just stayed silent... Jacqueline
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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My heart bleeds for you. I was treated in a very similar fashion by my own mother. She resents everything about me. I totally relate. Sometimes your stories are hard to read as the words cut to my core. I too, was vulnerable as a child, I never felt safe nor protected. Thank you for speaking out. I just stayed silent... Jacqueline
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Yeah, clean, I'm so sorry you had to go through that. My 2 understand as you know. And I have compassion and empathy. But I see you are strong and very talented lady. My life you live today seems pretty cool if I might say you as always for your reviews. And for your insight and the way that you see things it's appreciated by me. Thank you again, my friend. I hope you are o k and having a good day!
Comment from BethShelby
Did he actually knock you out for that remark? Since he isn't your biological father, did he adopt you? He acts as though he owns you and doesn't give your mother in say in what you can do and not do. I can't help but get angry when you tell this story. I'm sure their side would sound different but your side is believable.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Did he actually knock you out for that remark? Since he isn't your biological father, did he adopt you? He acts as though he owns you and doesn't give your mother in say in what you can do and not do. I can't help but get angry when you tell this story. I'm sure their side would sound different but your side is believable.
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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My parents could charm the pants off of an alligator they were very manipulative and had people believe that they were this great. And wonderful couple which is all part of the persona of the abuser. I have my prso much documentation. It's unreal and the memories that return to me. You know I'll probably introduce some of that in my rewrites. Thank you Beth! My anger has known no bounds. When it comes to this. However, I will not need to do anything except try to publish this book and when I do I shall just sit back and watch Karma. Come in and do her bit. I need not lift a finger. Thank you, my friend. I so appreciate everything. You say and for your reviews and for hanging in there with me!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You were brave to stand up to your Stepfather like this Lea. My sister stood up to my Father like this and he thumped her too. I always kept my mouth shut, but she was black and blue. He never apologised for any of his bad temper and violent behaviour and even said that he had no regrets about his life. I left home when I was 18 years old and I never looked back. You are a bit younger here Lea and you suffered so much at the hands of this man. It is so appalling and hard to read at times. Another fine chapter, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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You were brave to stand up to your Stepfather like this Lea. My sister stood up to my Father like this and he thumped her too. I always kept my mouth shut, but she was black and blue. He never apologised for any of his bad temper and violent behaviour and even said that he had no regrets about his life. I left home when I was 18 years old and I never looked back. You are a bit younger here Lea and you suffered so much at the hands of this man. It is so appalling and hard to read at times. Another fine chapter, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you, darling. I appreciate your understanding. I'm sorry you and your sister had to endure such things. I understand the pain of it. And I thank you as always for your wonderful reviews. Your compassion and you're kindness and you're your Eagle eye to see things as they are. Thank you again I hope you have a great day!
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It was a relatively very short part of my life Lea and I have had a wonderful life since and I never think of my childhood years now, love Dolly x
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It was a relatively very short part of my life Lea and I have had a wonderful life since and I never think of my childhood years now, love Dolly x
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I'm so glad to hear it
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And i'm so glad you have a great life this pleases me greatly!
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Bless you Lea, the question is, how good is your life now?
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My family never stopped meddling in my life. Always wanting to see me fall. I only had about 5 years of peace when I left and moved 1200 kilometers away. And my husband passed away and my family involved themselves once again today. I write because it's the only thing I have left now is myself. My sons are grown and successful couple years back. We had some really bad natural disasters. All our highways were washed out. Nobody could get in or out. I was stuck for many weeks while I was gone. My family took my home my vehicle. Everything of values that I owned was gone and sold out of my house. Such a way as to contact my employer to convince family members of something that I am not always with the Internal destruction, why I don't know that's no point in.
But I will write about that in the future. Today, everything I owned and worked for is gone I spent 30 years as a customs officer, covid, and natural disasters, and being unable to get back to my own home. They took advantage and cleaned me out. Today, I am really retired. Waiting for hip surgery.
I rent a small room built off the side of a house. But it's my room no one can take it from me. He and my little dog lived in this room. Hi fixed it up as best as I could and my friend helped me. Get power to the room and insulated and I painted in wallpapers. Sound the best I could with the space that I have. I wish I could say there was a happy ending. So I'm going to try and create my own one of the steps being writing.
I cannot go back to work. So I must think of other ways to try and make my life a little bit more easier. Our retirement packages here are about a third of what's required to survive. So this is the why I only rent a room. I drive an old 99 Honda. Accord with the passenger side window that doesn't go up. And when I hit the brakes on car. A big wave of water rushes forth. And yes, my feet, but you know what her name is Alice. She's a really good car and never stops running. There are two things that they can't take from or myself. Things with this book are heading out greatly. So I must take my car and hope. I make the journey away from here. This is a story in itself. I'm afraid and this first book goes from where I actually leave 1200 km away. I'm thinking of a second. What happened until now in my life. I'm calling it Spector. Look like you're right into there's nothing left to say. Thank you Dolly for asking I appreciate it. I'm sorry that this is a long-winded explanation. But it is actually really short compared to the whole story... Thank you again my friend for hanging in there and reading with me. I never thought support could be had. I thought it was alone and that's the way it was going to be. Bad so appreciative of the end of you. Contact with when I come on this site so you are iconic. Thank you my friend again I hope you have the best day!
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Thank you for sharing your story with me Lea and I can?t believe your family have been so spiteful towards you, love Dolly x x x
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I still own bewildered by a whole lot of things that to let it all out here. Certainly, is I think my jewelry has to write my story. And I paint wildlife pictures and I'm very spiritual for a multitude of reasons. That will come up at some point. I will likely end this book from the time that I left the province and then perhaps another.
From the time I came back from the other province. Anyway, it's a long story. Life is a long story. Really thank you again. I hope your day is amazing. You should have awesome days every day. You deserve it!