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Comment from JSD
Keep recording the horror and surely it will get it out of your head. Your memories can be cleansed. Focus on the good things you have now. Take care. Thanks for continuing to work through the horror. X
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Keep recording the horror and surely it will get it out of your head. Your memories can be cleansed. Focus on the good things you have now. Take care. Thanks for continuing to work through the horror. X
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you till the end. I'm not a very good stop in the middle kind of person. I sort of have to keep going once I start. And I also feel it's the right path. Always happy to see you here. Thank you so very much. I shall keep saying it over and over and over!
Comment from JT traveller
Your introduction is so well written and powerful. I was absolutely captivated. As you write you heal. You know the truth. I hope this is published on a wider scale for the world to feel your pain.
Music is great therapy, as is writing. I love this. Your writing is so unbridled, so raw and intense. Your voice deserves to be heard. Shout loud, strong warrior. Jacqueline xx
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Your introduction is so well written and powerful. I was absolutely captivated. As you write you heal. You know the truth. I hope this is published on a wider scale for the world to feel your pain.
Music is great therapy, as is writing. I love this. Your writing is so unbridled, so raw and intense. Your voice deserves to be heard. Shout loud, strong warrior. Jacqueline xx
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you, my sweet and kind friend Jacqueline. I'm so happy to have you in my life. I'm so happy to see when your reviews come up. They're always so very good. They always have great and constructive things to say I appreciate you. I hope you have the best day!
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My absolute pleasure. I am leaving FS soon but will definitely keep in touch via email. My head is everywhere atm. I have started a fourth novel set in India as we visited recently and the memories are still so vivid.
I love how your writing has evolved for me. I feel that you have really owned yourself and your life and I am both happy for you and proud of you. Stay well, Jacqui aka Victoria Reiby....still awaiting my debut novel to be published "Obsessed". Have a wonderful life. Xx
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And you too my friend I hope to hear from you occasionally. Although I'm sad and to see you go. You must fly with the wind and where the wind takes you. I wish you only good things!
Lea
Oxox🙃🙂😉
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This post/chapter reminded me of the saying that some people just shouldn't have children, or have any kind of access to them, either.
You sure describe what went on with believable details.
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This post/chapter reminded me of the saying that some people just shouldn't have children, or have any kind of access to them, either.
You sure describe what went on with believable details.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you, my friend. I'm so happy to see your name come up as always. I'm pleased with the insightful comments you have and I shall say it again and again. I appreciate that you are long. The ride with me and reading more than you know. For such an important thing. I appreciate you so very much and I hope your day is amazing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wonder if your Mother and Stepfather are reading your words today Lea? Do they feel any regret for what has happened? Especially your Mother who failed to protect you from the monster in the house. Your Stepfather feels justified in his actions and yet they are criminal and he should be serving time for what he has done. I hope he does not try and harm you for exposing his behaviour like this. If a child came to me with your story I would give them refuge and I hope your plan works. We will see, another fine chapter in your sorrowful story. How you were able to get an education with all this going on is beyond me, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I wonder if your Mother and Stepfather are reading your words today Lea? Do they feel any regret for what has happened? Especially your Mother who failed to protect you from the monster in the house. Your Stepfather feels justified in his actions and yet they are criminal and he should be serving time for what he has done. I hope he does not try and harm you for exposing his behaviour like this. If a child came to me with your story I would give them refuge and I hope your plan works. We will see, another fine chapter in your sorrowful story. How you were able to get an education with all this going on is beyond me, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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My mother is reading yes she is I don't think she likes it much. She's busy trying to get me ousted from my home. She is she and other family members and others have taken all that I owned. There's nothing left except myself and they cannot have that. That's the story all by itself. But now I have made such a change that they can never meddle again. Thank you, my friend. Thank you so much for your awesome words. I appreciate you. I'll tell you over and over again thank you!
Comment from Chuck Keller
I sincerely hope this effort you're going through is having some therapeutic affect on your PTSD.
Finally talking about the trauma is what finally helped me climb out of "my cave" into the light of semi-sanity.
As always you continue to express your horror well.
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I sincerely hope this effort you're going through is having some therapeutic affect on your PTSD.
Finally talking about the trauma is what finally helped me climb out of "my cave" into the light of semi-sanity.
As always you continue to express your horror well.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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It is helpful to write it down for me. It's like peeling an onion every time you take a layer off. It takes some of the power away. And that's what the writing of it does for me. I hope to publish and should I do so that this book helps somebody shouldn't help somebody. Then it's all worship to me. I've so appreciate you in your comments. If I haven't said it a 100 times already. I'll say it a hundred more times thank you my friend enjoy your day!