Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Well done Wayne. You set the scene and described the action vividly and precise. I enjoyed reading about Ben's work as he follows God's calling. He is not afraid of hard work and now he has a good women by his side. I didn't see any spags. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you for your very kind review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hooray for Ben! He listened to the Spirit and knew what he had to do. I guess Perkins is used to having people work and leave without much notice. It's great that he was about to hire both Ben and Beth. Hope their regular cook is willing to learn from a woman.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you.
My guess is that 'Chuck' knew he couldn't cook breads and welcomed the training.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Ben gets some pretty sore hands as he works as part of God's plan. It is amazing that he did not know what God wanted him there for but had faith to keep on working until God signaled him. One sentence is confusing. It begins: With the same whoop . . .

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you. Ben is attuned to the Holy Spirit. Detailed instructions would get in the way of his situational awareness.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I've been told by so many people that plot and theme are what's most important in a story. But I have to humbly disagree, at least for me. Stories are about characters, and plots and themes are strictly what the characters do. And very few can make characters nearly as intriguing as you. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you. Your words are blessings.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

What a nice story wonder if she can make biscuits for me too l o l. I know about falling trees used to do it with my cousin up in the caribou country. Very well written an interesting story from beginning to end. Well written characters and just enough action to keep it going good. I seek no issues with grammar punctuations or sentence structure It's a great entry best of luck to you!

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 Comment Written 06-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023

Thank you. I appreciate your very kind review.