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Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm sure that passed down dirty water didn't do much to make you feel clean, but I guess, with enough soap, it might have been a little better than no water at all. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I'm sure that passed down dirty water didn't do much to make you feel clean, but I guess, with enough soap, it might have been a little better than no water at all. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hi Ric, thank you my friend! That time I got the tub to myself. A rare occurance! I'm always happy to see your reviews and happy to see you reading along. I appreciate you very much thank you again have a great day!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You describe the scene in the bath so vividly, Lea, I can almost smell that septic tank and the humiliation you were made to feel. Of course there was no self-esteem - he made sure of that! All part of his plan but, in turn, generating your own. A great chapter driving this journey onward to some hopeful respite. No errors noted. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Debbie x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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You describe the scene in the bath so vividly, Lea, I can almost smell that septic tank and the humiliation you were made to feel. Of course there was no self-esteem - he made sure of that! All part of his plan but, in turn, generating your own. A great chapter driving this journey onward to some hopeful respite. No errors noted. Thanks for sharing, Lea. Debbie x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you debbie you know you are the best! It's appreciate everyone's reaction I can't stop saying it I really hope this leads to helping someone because make it all worth it. Thank you again my friend for reading along , And you're waiting thank you my friend I appreciate it!
Comment from damommy
I know the agony of pulling weeds bare-handed, but I've never pulled many before I put gloves on. Even though it hurt to bathe them, I bet they felt better afterward. I cannot imagine, and I say this every time, people treating anyone this way, much less a child, especially her mother. The first time someone hurt my child in any way, I wouldn't hesitate to take them out.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I know the agony of pulling weeds bare-handed, but I've never pulled many before I put gloves on. Even though it hurt to bathe them, I bet they felt better afterward. I cannot imagine, and I say this every time, people treating anyone this way, much less a child, especially her mother. The first time someone hurt my child in any way, I wouldn't hesitate to take them out.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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I'm with you on that 1 I especially get angry when i see other Mother's or fathers hating their children that really makes me serious and i think what could make you raise your hand to your child like that. There are other ways of dealing with it as she felt know. Thank you my friend for reading! I'm always happy to see if you're review and grateful that you're right. You're reading along with me. I appreciate that I hope your day is great!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm glad you were able to have a hot bath and get clean and it must have been awful to be so dirty. And your fingers were stinging as you did this job with your bare hands. This is often part of humiliating others by not allowing them to wash and have basic hygiene. I am glad that a plan was forming for and you wanted to escape yet again and live a good life for yourself, but at 16 you are still incredibly young. Another fine post Lea, love Dolly x x x
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I'm glad you were able to have a hot bath and get clean and it must have been awful to be so dirty. And your fingers were stinging as you did this job with your bare hands. This is often part of humiliating others by not allowing them to wash and have basic hygiene. I am glad that a plan was forming for and you wanted to escape yet again and live a good life for yourself, but at 16 you are still incredibly young. Another fine post Lea, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Dolly.
Yes, I do get out. I've mentioned answers coming in increments. Rather than one fabulous solution. I wish it were so but life is not like that it seems. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from BethShelby
Some people are destroyed by what you when through but you have a lot of guts and good mind and in spite of the hardship, it didn't break you but rather made you stronger. I hope you when you've finiished this you will be able to put it behind you and move on to all the things you are capable of.
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Some people are destroyed by what you when through but you have a lot of guts and good mind and in spite of the hardship, it didn't break you but rather made you stronger. I hope you when you've finiished this you will be able to put it behind you and move on to all the things you are capable of.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Yes, indeed, that is my hope finished telling the world. What happened knowing I did what I could put it in the box and on the shelf.
I think it would have stayed there if my mother hadn't continued to interfered with my life. But thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate you and your thoughts and awesome suggestions thanks again I hope your day's great! You rock!