2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from royowen
It's one of those ponderables, what do we do with the remains, I'm not one to visit burial sites, I have my mother's ashes still at home, beautifully written gypsy, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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It's one of those ponderables, what do we do with the remains, I'm not one to visit burial sites, I have my mother's ashes still at home, beautifully written gypsy, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. :)
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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh this is beautiful. Your presentation is gorgeous and I love the phrase, "winds of change." They may not be very long, but they always are powerful.
I also wanted to tell you Im sorry for signing up to do one in the club and didn't get a chance this week. I will try for the next one.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Oh this is beautiful. Your presentation is gorgeous and I love the phrase, "winds of change." They may not be very long, but they always are powerful.
I also wanted to tell you Im sorry for signing up to do one in the club and didn't get a chance this week. I will try for the next one.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Please don't worry, you are not obligated to participate, you can do it when is right for you. Thank you very much, Debi. :)
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Comment from leather
I'm not sure which season of the year the year is alluded to in this poem, but it seems death never misses one.
The image is lovely and looks very fertile, so it is all well-connected.
I thought the line about the winds of change was supremely fitting because passing from this earthly existence is a monumental change.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I'm not sure which season of the year the year is alluded to in this poem, but it seems death never misses one.
The image is lovely and looks very fertile, so it is all well-connected.
I thought the line about the winds of change was supremely fitting because passing from this earthly existence is a monumental change.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There are many interpretations in these few words as our imagination is free to think here. Scattered ashes of death as time moves on and new seeds of hope are fertile and eager, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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There are many interpretations in these few words as our imagination is free to think here. Scattered ashes of death as time moves on and new seeds of hope are fertile and eager, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Very beautiful Gypsy! Love everything about it besides agreeing with the sentiment.
I guess that's one way to recycle ourselves lol.
Ahes to ashes
Dust to Dust
Exceptionally done!
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Very beautiful Gypsy! Love everything about it besides agreeing with the sentiment.
I guess that's one way to recycle ourselves lol.
Ahes to ashes
Dust to Dust
Exceptionally done!
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, Katie Mae, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs