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Comment from Chuck Keller
As this tale continues
I have to control my anger from increasing my blood pressure to the exploding point.
Your stepfather was a horrible monster.
I knew someone who was mistreated like this.
I always blamed her mother for not having the courage to do anything or at the very least
LEAVE!
ð?¤?ð???
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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As this tale continues
I have to control my anger from increasing my blood pressure to the exploding point.
Your stepfather was a horrible monster.
I knew someone who was mistreated like this.
I always blamed her mother for not having the courage to do anything or at the very least
LEAVE!
ð?¤?ð???
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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A plan is forming the best laid plans. Sometimes have to be adjusted on the fly. Believe me, those thoughts went through my head a million times. I do leave yes indeed but at the time I was forming an idea of how to get away. Thank you again Chuck! I appreciate you!
Comment from thoughtgame2
Very interesting read young lady. Just by knowing your craft and expecting nothing less than 100 percent authenticity I'm moved to continue.But;ill stop for now and come back to this piece so not to disrespect and finger through too quickly. Have a great time writing. Again, this is a job well done.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Very interesting read young lady. Just by knowing your craft and expecting nothing less than 100 percent authenticity I'm moved to continue.But;ill stop for now and come back to this piece so not to disrespect and finger through too quickly. Have a great time writing. Again, this is a job well done.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you, my friend. I totally understand some of it can be hard to read. Occasionally a break is required. I appreciate your kind comments, thank you so much. I hope you have a wonderful day and that you are feeling good and home again!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This man is the WORST human being (and I use that term loosely, I trust you know!) What a complete and total louse he is in every possible way. I love that, eventually, thanks to you, he is going to get his come-uppance (and your "mother," as well) but it is tough to read what you had to endure before that happens.
You're doing just great with the story-telling. Excellent momentum and full-speed ahead. You are such a dedicated writer!!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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This man is the WORST human being (and I use that term loosely, I trust you know!) What a complete and total louse he is in every possible way. I love that, eventually, thanks to you, he is going to get his come-uppance (and your "mother," as well) but it is tough to read what you had to endure before that happens.
You're doing just great with the story-telling. Excellent momentum and full-speed ahead. You are such a dedicated writer!!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend. You are the most awesome, amazing person for your reviews. And your constant support, I'm very appreciative. Thanks, enjoy your day!
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Same. xo
Comment from Jim Wile
I think your stepfather may have overplayed his hand this time and has only served to drive you out even faster. You are definitely giving it some serious thought now. Your sister has mercifully been taken away, so now it's your turn to fly the coop again. I hope you ended up doing that, as you are in a perilous place right now, and almost anything has to be better than what you are facing with him around.
I'm so glad you're able to use that steely determination to get this story out in the open, Lea. - Jim
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I think your stepfather may have overplayed his hand this time and has only served to drive you out even faster. You are definitely giving it some serious thought now. Your sister has mercifully been taken away, so now it's your turn to fly the coop again. I hope you ended up doing that, as you are in a perilous place right now, and almost anything has to be better than what you are facing with him around.
I'm so glad you're able to use that steely determination to get this story out in the open, Lea. - Jim
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you again, Jim Yup. It isn't long before I Goh to say that 1 glorious answer fixed. Everything would not be answers common increments. Let's up to us to puzzle the pieces togethank you again. I appreciate you all your fine reviews. Hope you have the publish too, yes I do!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
By the end of this chapter, you've found your mantra. So your brain is reflecting that "steely determination" of yours. You've recovered from your exhaustion and, if you have to be an automaton, so be it. This is the only way to make your inner drive a reality - self-belief. Just one small edit: A (D)ifficult sensation to explain (no need for the capital letter). An excellent continuation of your journey. Stay strong, Lea. Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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By the end of this chapter, you've found your mantra. So your brain is reflecting that "steely determination" of yours. You've recovered from your exhaustion and, if you have to be an automaton, so be it. This is the only way to make your inner drive a reality - self-belief. Just one small edit: A (D)ifficult sensation to explain (no need for the capital letter). An excellent continuation of your journey. Stay strong, Lea. Debbie
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you again, my friend. You always offer such wonderful and constructive reviews. I think without you and others. I might shy away, but that is not the case. And it's because of you and others, so if anyone wants to know who wrote this book, we all did really all of us. Thank you again, have an awesome day!
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I never know if I should say it's a pleasure to read because of the contents but it's always effortless as though it has a momentum and purpose of its own.
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I understand it's the tough one. Thank you again!
Comment from BethShelby
He actually decided you really were sick. He must have tried to get you up and wasn't able to. He don't plan to give you time to recover. It seem he wants to get you angry. This is another well written chapter. A girl I'd never heard of before became my fan this morning. I went to her sight. She said she was a horrible abused child, and she writes to try to recover. It reminds me of you.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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He actually decided you really were sick. He must have tried to get you up and wasn't able to. He don't plan to give you time to recover. It seem he wants to get you angry. This is another well written chapter. A girl I'd never heard of before became my fan this morning. I went to her sight. She said she was a horrible abused child, and she writes to try to recover. It reminds me of you.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you again!
Comment from BethShelby
He actually decided you really were sick. He must have tried to get you up and wasn't able to. He don't plan to give you time to recover. It seem he wants to get you angry. This is another well written chapter. A girl I'd never heard of before became my fan this morning. I went to her sight. She said she was a horrible abused child, and she writes to try to recover. It reminds me of you.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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He actually decided you really were sick. He must have tried to get you up and wasn't able to. He don't plan to give you time to recover. It seem he wants to get you angry. This is another well written chapter. A girl I'd never heard of before became my fan this morning. I went to her sight. She said she was a horrible abused child, and she writes to try to recover. It reminds me of you.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you stopping in for a read. Yes, it is therapeutic definitely express yourself in this way but it's the healthiest way. Really. I wish her the best of luck and I hope that she's able to resolve her pain. And I'm trying to resolve my thank you again. I appreciate you and your kind comments have a wonderful day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am glad you are able to sleep for long periods as sleep is really important to us and it is healing. Your Stepfather will never let up with his hatred of you and if you do not leave, then the abuse will continue. It has nothing to do with the job he is asking you to do, it is the fact that he expects you to do the job without the proper gloves or equipment and he is treating it as a punishment. This attitude will not stop. It is no wonder you want to leave and make it on your own Lea. Another fine chapter here, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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I am glad you are able to sleep for long periods as sleep is really important to us and it is healing. Your Stepfather will never let up with his hatred of you and if you do not leave, then the abuse will continue. It has nothing to do with the job he is asking you to do, it is the fact that he expects you to do the job without the proper gloves or equipment and he is treating it as a punishment. This attitude will not stop. It is no wonder you want to leave and make it on your own Lea. Another fine chapter here, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly appreciate this for you. Your insight as always is spot on. However, answers come in increments and they are coming. Thank you again, have a great and awesome day!
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I am looking forward to your posts Lea and I want to know how things turned out, love Dolly x
Comment from damommy
How awful to pull weeds in those conditions. The big jerk is too lazy to do anything around the house. I hope you got away soon after that. People like that should never be around children, and a mother like yours should be sterilized.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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How awful to pull weeds in those conditions. The big jerk is too lazy to do anything around the house. I hope you got away soon after that. People like that should never be around children, and a mother like yours should be sterilized.
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
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It wasn't too long before I left for good. What I didn't know is that some things would follow my parents. Meddidn't see until I leftwelve 100 km away but that's another story. Thank you again for reading I appreciate it. Thank you for your kind reading and for your thoughtful and insightful words. I hope you have a great day.!