Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm glad that Echo could make that one last phone call to her grandparents. She's being very patient for an investigative reporter! I guess her trust in Theo allows her to wait for all those answers.

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Hi Helen! Hope all is well in your world!
Echo won?t stay patient long! Once away from danger, she?ll find her verbal stride!

Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is interesting as it is obvious that Echo is going into another lifestyle among Theo's people, who don't seem to be entirely human. I am really enjoying this story.

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Carol. It is a transition chapter, giving all involved a chance to learn.
I appreciate your time, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda

Comment from Sally Law

Exceptional

Another fanstastic and engaging chapter. I see that Theo and Echo have maintained their strong bond. He cares for her and figured out a way for Echo to call her grandparents without being detected. Very cool story of the spiritual and physical world. I look forward to more.

Sending you my best today as always, dear Rhonda, and blessings for your writing endeavors.
Love,
Sal Xos

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023

Hi Sally,

Thank you for the six stars and supportive review. A little time to regather and tie up loose ends. The original version was a lot longer. It just kept growing until I cut it in half. I?ll post the other half next week. Echo gets nosy and persistent on him as their travels take a while, lol. The reporter in her starts coming out.
Thanks for the blessings, my dear friend.

Much love,
Rhonda

reply by Sally Law on 09-Nov-2023

Mosr welcome. My pleasure as always. Have a wonderful week!
Sal XOs

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I have been watching for more of this story. It keeps getting better and better as it goes forward. As usual, your descriptions and dialogues are perfect. I look forward the the next chapter.

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023

Thank you so much for the review, my friend! You have encouraged me! I appreciate your comments on dialogue and description, that?s what I work hardest on balancing.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine chapter, Rhonda....so, they're on their way, Theo, Echo, and a cat named Sunshine in a bag. Looking forward to their continued adventures

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023

Thanks for the review, Mike! A clever summarization! Next chapter will be out soon. This one had gotten too long, so I cut it in half, lol, so next chapter?s already written.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A lovely, well crafted discussion here between Echo and Theo with the former being just a tad on her guard, albeit drawn, despite herself, to Theo. The fighting is over and the couple seem to be in relative safety at the moment. But is this a bit of a lull before the next storm? Beautifully written as ever, Rhonda. Thank you for sharing Debbie

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023

Hi Debbie, thank you for your kind review! You?re right, it?s sort of a summarizing and tying up loose ends chapter. A momentary lull. Echo will get a lull in action for a bit, but not in adventure.

Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Hugs,
Rhonda