Comment from
JSD
The pictures at the start are such fun!
This is hilarious, although I was a bit worried at first. Typical of those video games I used to play many years ago when you could find secret tunnels or short cuts and seemed to be breaking out of the game. Very clever. Just love it. Don't want it to end.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2023
What a nice review, John! I'm going to be sad when it ends on Wednesday. It's been fun having such dedicated fans as you who've been with the story from the start.