Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Yeah, cats are quite untrustworthy...always thinking of ways to even the score. This guy got what was coming to him. I understand completely.

Nice sicko entry here, Mystery Contestant. I genuinely liked it and hope others do, as well. Good luck at the polls.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. Hey, what was she supposed to do? I mean, the evil man killed her brother.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 04-Nov-2023

Oh, exactly!! She had NO choice!!

Comment from L. Kalere

Exceptional

This story gave me paws ... er, pause. You built it up from the beginning, maintained suspense all the way through, and gave a very satisfying ending. Cats were made for revenge, and this one did not disappoint. Well done, I loved it.

Linda

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you, and thanks for the six stars. I think killing a cat is murder, so I found this easy to write.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi mystery writer! I love the surprise ending where the cat is the one sitting in wait with vengeance on his heart. He waits, sneaks and pounces. Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. I love writing cat stories of any kind.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 04-Nov-2023

Oh cool! I mostly have dogs, but one cat who thinks he runs the place, lol.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Wow I wasn't expecting that ending. Very unexpected! I remember being a passenger in a car once and the driver deliberately drove over a cat! I wanted to be sick. How cruel. Your story brought back that memory for me sadly but it is a very good piece of flash fiction.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. There is nothing I despise more than animal cruelty. It's too bad animals don't take revenge on low-lives who abuse them.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest.

Your Flash fiction is engaging and the plot is easy to follow, the kind that readers want more, and can't put down.�  I'm curious to find out what happens next! Well done.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read the silly story.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

You got me! I thought it was a man, but it was a cat wanting revenge. Rightfully so. This is a great story told fully in so few words. If animals start retaliating, a lot of people are in big trouble. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. I agree, if animals stood up to cruel masters it would be a good thing.

Comment from Sarita Méndez

Exceptional

This is an excellent story, with such a surprising twist at the end ! I didn't see it come ! And as I hadn't paid enough attention to the picture (very well chosen, here !), I hadn't imagine that it was a cat that talked !
I love it !
Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you, and thanks for the six stars. I'm a cat lover, so killing a cat is murder in my book.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Okay, that was unexpected. Sounds like the man killed cats intentionally. People who are cruel to animals are also cruel to other people.


Good job here!
D

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. That's so true. People who are cruel to animals are often cruel to their fellow man.

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

Well done. Good for the cat! The man had it coming. Hard for a cat to kill a man, but he did the next best thing: to blind him so he couldn't see to kill another cat.

I think this could be applied to humans equally well. Instead of simply incarcerating a rapist, castrate him too so he can't be a repeat offender when he has served his term. Might be a good alternative to capital punishment too. Blind those who murder others.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. I aagree with you on the castrating thing, especially for child molesters.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I've become a fan of flash fiction lately. Able to get to the point quickly without spending days reading. Thanks for sharing your find story and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2023

Thank you. I agree. I like flash fiction for the same reason, as well as the fact that it only takes a few minutes to write the stories.