Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

oooh creepy!! COOL!!

good haiku suite story
spooky imagery
smooth cutting flow
cool pics, too

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Wow this is a very well written piece of horror poetry in haiku format. You have described the scene so vividly that I can picture them and feel the terror! Very well done.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But you, and Dean, have always had a special way of saying so much with so few words. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Wow. This was incredibly frightening. The pics and the beginning were scary enough, but the secret was the worst. Evidently the thing in the wall has a good memory. Poor kid. This was awesome. Thanks for keeping the Kuth flame alive. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Now that wouldn't be very nice, making arrangement with a thing that lives in the wall, it reminds me of the bogeyman under the the bed, kids should be sheltered, beautifully written, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

Hehehe...I wouldn't tell this scary poem to a child. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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reply by royowen on 02-Nov-2023

Well done

Comment from kiwisteveh

Exceptional

Ha! I'm handing out sixes today like Halloween candy!

I love this whole thing - the idea of a suite of haiku to tell a complete story and a horror story at that. And quite a tale it is; the twist about his father having sold him is a master stroke.

I miss Dean. His name popped up today in a facebook group.

Steve

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

I know, his Facebook account is still there... it's spooky, but Dean loved horror. That's one of the many things we shared. I miss his posts and his sense of humor.

Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

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Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Wow. It's creepy and it's spooky and all together kooky, wait a minute... that's the Addams Family.

All kidding aside, posted one helluva Halloween tale.

Wonder what's next.
John

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

I love the Adam's family and the Munsters. (*<>*)

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

That's serious horror. And, what a turn of events. There are a few people out there that should have been offered to the beasties:)). Loved it.

Linda

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

LoL yes, I could think of a few.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's pretty creepy to read to a kid! I'm surprised you have time to post. We're having kids coming every few minutes. They are all so cute and most prefer a toy to the candy offered.

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

We don't get any kids here because it's a town house away from the street.

Micaela, her husband and Atticus left me. They had a good time. Last time we went I had a hard time walking on the ground in the dark. I also don't think my daughter wanted me to come. Atticus had a great time, that's all that matters.

How about yours?

Thank you, big sister. I'm happy you like it.

Love

Marival

reply by lyenochka on 01-Nov-2023

It was so busy! Our old house never got any trick or treaters but I'm sure we had about a hundred kids!!

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2023

Yeaks! Poor big sister. We're the customes cute? I missed that. When I was young I loved dressing up. Today we did mini-golf... (*÷*) Atticus had fun.